4 Years Later

Basketball Girl
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“Lets break up.....” it still ringing at my head. Although Chanyeol already left me. But his voice still fullfill my head. His voice that said something the most line that I don’t want to hear it.His deep husky voice that once told me about the sweet thing but now just told me about something that broke my heart. He left me . He said he love me but he left me. And I just could let him go. I just could see his back and do nothing except... crying. Someone grabbed my shoulder but I’m too weak to turn around. My legs are trembling and couldn’t support my body again. I fell down.

“Eonni.. eonni wee? What did he tell you eonni? Why are you crying?” It’s Sooyoung. But I’m too weak to answer her. I’m too weak to told her.

“Jiyeon-aa.. what’s wrong? Please don’t be like this.” It’s Minwoo oppa now. I looked at his eyes. Trying to open my mouth.

“Omma once told me about this. She want me to promise to not trust someone. I promise her to not trust any one oppa... She don’t want me to be hurt but I broke that promise oppa. I trust Chanyeol. I thought he’s different. He’s different from appa. I thought he never hurt me like appa hurt omma but now... oppa what should I do?? Oppa.... tell me what should I do? He left me oppa. He left me because of that girl. Just like appa...Oppa what should I do..” Minwoo oppa hugged me thightly. I thought I would cry but no. Suddenly my tears wont come. My head was blank. Maybe because it’s too painful for me.

“I should keep my promise with omma right? It’s omma punishment oppa because I broke the promise. I should listen omma words. Right oppa?”

“Ssstt stop it Jiyeon. Stop it. It hurt me so much. Sorry Jiyeon sorry to let you feel this pain again. Sorry.” Suddenly my vision blurred and then black.

 

 

Author POV

4 years later

“DAEHAN MINGUK...’prok prok prok prok prok’...DAEHAN MINGUK..” Load shouts from people fill the hall. Today’s game maybe not really important like olimpiade or Asia games. Today’s game is just friendly match with Japan’s team. But for the Korean’s team captain today’s game is just like another game, her war field. Her eyes just like usual, full of flames. She have to win. Her team have to win. Although everybody tried to calm her and said this game just warm up but she’s not willing to take it slow for this game. No ‘lost’ word at her dictionary. Lost just for the loser.

“Okay I thought today is just friendly match and warm up game for us. But it seems uri captain really enthusiast. She’s not give Japan’s team a chance to steal her ball.”

“Yeah. I can see flame in all over her body right now~”

“I thought she’s an ice princess.”

“Yeah She’s uri ice princess with flame in all over her body.”

“I don’t ger it.”

“Naahh just watch the game bro.. Woaaa another three point from uri captain. 80-50 for Korean’s team.”

The commentators gave their comments for the game. They’re right, the captain indeed an ice princess with flame in all over her body. No one could stop her to rule the game. All hail the captain!!

 

After the fourth quarter all of you can guess which team won the game. The Korean’s team and of course their win is because their captain. The ice princess. Their game is over. And they win. But her eyes still full of flame. She’s too excited.

“Okay team. Today was great. But it seem some of you still played too relax. I know this game just friendly match but still you have to play well. Okay?”

“Ay ay captain!!!”

“Okay you have one week to rest. See you next week then”

After dismissed her team, the ice princess decided to take a shower first. Too much flame today. She want to cooling her body and her mind.

After 15 minutes she’s out from locker room. With her bag at her shoulder she’s walking slowly. Too tired to rush. But then she stopped. She saw a man. A tall white man with light grey hair. No, not an oldman. Too cute to be old. He gave the ice princess smile. He clapped his hand.

“Woaa noona daebak. Jjang!! Congratulation!!” He slowly walked towards the princess.

“What are you doing here?”

“Eeeyy don’t be such a cold like that to me noona.” He took the princess bag and put it at his shoulder.

“I ask you. What are you doing? And who told you to take my bag? Give me back!”

“No I wont. I’ll come to fetch you of course. This is my job. As a servant I have to serve my princess really well. Don’t be so noisy. Just do your job noona. Being pretty and cold as usual ehehehe.” The man walked away from her.

“Yaaak Oh Sehun!”

“Yes Park Jiyeon?”

“You said you come to fetch me but yet you left me.

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rizkiamut
#1
Chapter 27: Finally I finished reading this story.
Park Chanyeol is really lucky. Despite his dumbest decisions, Jiyeon accept his feelings so soon. I want to see Park siblings punch him together hahaha before they live happily ever after *kidding.
Honestly, Yein's character is kind of blur in my head. She had no real and strong intention to split Chanyeon relationship because she wasn't that obsessed to Chanyeol. She disappeared so suddenly after 4 years, so it make the story didnt have enough conflict, especially when I expect some moment of jealousy and others kkkk.
But you made a good characterization about Park siblings very well. Their characters were very consistent. I like it. I enjoyed this story, especially when this is your first time writing in english. I appreciate your hard work and expect more for your upcoming story :)
rizkiamut
#2
Chapter 20: Aw, there is my name (sorry for late reading your note).
Can I at least forget about the real pairing in this story and the ending Jiyeon is going to have? I feel bad for Sehun. He always try to reach Jiyeon's heart but got rejected from Jiyeon.
Aww I dont know how to say. I know I give you advice about Chanyeon, but because I dont know what happen in the next chapter, I am still rooting for Sehun NOW. Just now.
rizkiamut
#3
Chapter 18: Aw. Full Seyeon moment in one chapter is not really good for my heart. And my favorite pair sinks at that moment.
rizkiamut
#4
Chapter 17: Finally I reach the chapter that make you confused, authornim!
Ahhh... if I read this chapter, yes, I want Jiyeon to end up with Sehun. He seems cherish Jiyeon so much more than Chanyeol.
rizkiamut
#5
Chapter 5: Ah just found time to continue reading this story.
I really like their characters. Park siblings are so cute. Chanyeol... cool, handsome, make my heart melt <3
I just dont understand why Chanyeol didnt have cellphone when he was rich. So, it's quite understanding why Park siblings call his reason for not calling and texting Jiyeon are bull.
About Suzy... wow! I didnt expect that. I curious about Minho and Chanyeol relationship, but since in the next chapter maybe i will know about that, i wont ask here hehe.
Ah, one more time. I just hope you will describe more about their moment or when they have conversation. Because I feel the progress in this story is so fast. Maybe for your upcoming story.
But dont worry. I enjoyed this story :)
missright76 #6
Chapter 27: YEAHHHH FINALLY!!!
But i hope you make a short sequal. Hehe.
jiyeonnie77 #7
Chapter 27: Yeaaaaaayyy!!!!!! I wanna cry because of happiness x'D ok no I'm just kidding(?) but I don't know must be happy or sad, because it's already end T_T but I'm happy because Chanyeol and Jiyeon will getting married XD Sehun-ah you're such a good boy '-')b hope you'll find good girl too(?) author nim please make a sequel about their marriage and having child and live happily ever after XD can you make it pleasee~? But if you're busy you don't have to make it(?)
kakito94
#8
Chapter 27: Ending???huaaa,i will miss this story so much..hehe..such a great ending author-nim....i really love it...tq for your great love story...i will wait for midnight snack n your another ff too...:)
K_Tiara #9
Chapter 27: Huaaaa.. Can you give us a sequel about their marriage family.. hahhaha
Good job authornim.. Thank you for your great story~
Waiting for your next story too ♡