A Cute Smile Hoobae

Basketball Girl
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Today is Saturday so I don’t go to school. It’s weekend. Usually I really like weekend. Just lay down on my bed. Cuddling with my pillow. Or just having movie marathon with Park sibling. Don’t have to study. But now I kind a not into weekend anymore. Because I can’t see him. I can’t see his smile. Park Chanyeol. Ehehe just got love fever I guess.

I tried to ask him to go on a date or just come to my house. But he refused. He said that he have to go somewhere. So I couldn’t force him.

Emm okay then what should I do now. It’s 10pm right now. My brother go to Busan today. He have to take care something. Emm Sooyoung?

            ‘Knock Knock Knock’ “Eonniiii...” Ah there she is. I open my door and find her already wear a white short summer dress.

            “Do you want to go somewhere?”

            “Eung.” She nodded

            “With Sungjae?”

            “Eung.”

            “Okay. Have a good date.”

            “Ahh eonniii actually Sungjae got four free tickets to amusement park. Do you wanna come with us?”

            “Emmmm No. I wanna rest. The match is the day after tomorrow. So better to save my energy. Beside that I don’t want to be your wall at your date” heuuu

            “Yahh sist. You should have fun right now. And actually Sungjae’s friend come too so you’re not gonna be a wall. I would to ask Chanyeol but you said that he want to go somewhere right? So Sungjae asked his friend.”

            “But I don’t know him Sooyoung-ii.”

            “Ah you should know him. He is member of basketball team.”

            “Heh?”

            “Ahhh just get ready first sist. I’ll wait you at downstairs.”

            “Hmm okay.”

It’s not to take a long time to get dress. I just wear my jeans and red flannel shirt. After I get myself ready I go to downstairs. At the living room Sooyoung and Sungjae already there waiting for me. But someone that I don’t know sit beside Sungjae. Ahh maybe he is Sungjae’s friend.

            “Ahh you ready sist?” Sooyoung asked

            “Emm.” I nodded.

            “Waa your style very different with Sooyoung noona.” Sungjae asked

            “I really not comfortable with dress like Sooyoung.” Sungjae just nodded and smile. But his friend smiled too. Why? Is my answer weird or something?
            “Heuu just come on guys lets gooo” Sooyoung told us and then we ready to go.

We go to the amusement park with bus. Actually this amusement park is inside a mall. So after enter the mall, we straight go to top floor.

            “Ah noona. You do know him right?” Sungjae asked me about his friend beside him.

            “Emm sorry. Actually I don’t know you.” he seem disappointed. And then he come towards me. When he stand in front of me I just relized he so tall like Chanyeol but more calm. Actually he’s kind a cute. I really don’t know him but maybe I’ve seen him before.

            “I’m Sehun noona. Oh Sehun. Your hoobae at basketball team. I really disappointed that you don’t know me since I always got you mineral water if the boy team practice with the girl team.” Ahh that boy. I rememeber now. The boy who always gave me 1,5L m

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rizkiamut
#1
Chapter 27: Finally I finished reading this story.
Park Chanyeol is really lucky. Despite his dumbest decisions, Jiyeon accept his feelings so soon. I want to see Park siblings punch him together hahaha before they live happily ever after *kidding.
Honestly, Yein's character is kind of blur in my head. She had no real and strong intention to split Chanyeon relationship because she wasn't that obsessed to Chanyeol. She disappeared so suddenly after 4 years, so it make the story didnt have enough conflict, especially when I expect some moment of jealousy and others kkkk.
But you made a good characterization about Park siblings very well. Their characters were very consistent. I like it. I enjoyed this story, especially when this is your first time writing in english. I appreciate your hard work and expect more for your upcoming story :)
rizkiamut
#2
Chapter 20: Aw, there is my name (sorry for late reading your note).
Can I at least forget about the real pairing in this story and the ending Jiyeon is going to have? I feel bad for Sehun. He always try to reach Jiyeon's heart but got rejected from Jiyeon.
Aww I dont know how to say. I know I give you advice about Chanyeon, but because I dont know what happen in the next chapter, I am still rooting for Sehun NOW. Just now.
rizkiamut
#3
Chapter 18: Aw. Full Seyeon moment in one chapter is not really good for my heart. And my favorite pair sinks at that moment.
rizkiamut
#4
Chapter 17: Finally I reach the chapter that make you confused, authornim!
Ahhh... if I read this chapter, yes, I want Jiyeon to end up with Sehun. He seems cherish Jiyeon so much more than Chanyeol.
rizkiamut
#5
Chapter 5: Ah just found time to continue reading this story.
I really like their characters. Park siblings are so cute. Chanyeol... cool, handsome, make my heart melt <3
I just dont understand why Chanyeol didnt have cellphone when he was rich. So, it's quite understanding why Park siblings call his reason for not calling and texting Jiyeon are bull.
About Suzy... wow! I didnt expect that. I curious about Minho and Chanyeol relationship, but since in the next chapter maybe i will know about that, i wont ask here hehe.
Ah, one more time. I just hope you will describe more about their moment or when they have conversation. Because I feel the progress in this story is so fast. Maybe for your upcoming story.
But dont worry. I enjoyed this story :)
missright76 #6
Chapter 27: YEAHHHH FINALLY!!!
But i hope you make a short sequal. Hehe.
jiyeonnie77 #7
Chapter 27: Yeaaaaaayyy!!!!!! I wanna cry because of happiness x'D ok no I'm just kidding(?) but I don't know must be happy or sad, because it's already end T_T but I'm happy because Chanyeol and Jiyeon will getting married XD Sehun-ah you're such a good boy '-')b hope you'll find good girl too(?) author nim please make a sequel about their marriage and having child and live happily ever after XD can you make it pleasee~? But if you're busy you don't have to make it(?)
kakito94
#8
Chapter 27: Ending???huaaa,i will miss this story so much..hehe..such a great ending author-nim....i really love it...tq for your great love story...i will wait for midnight snack n your another ff too...:)
K_Tiara #9
Chapter 27: Huaaaa.. Can you give us a sequel about their marriage family.. hahhaha
Good job authornim.. Thank you for your great story~
Waiting for your next story too ♡