When I first met you

Basketball Girl
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‘Dung dung dung ... hoop’ Emm what’s that sound? It’s sound like someone play basketball. But who are the student that play basketball at early this morning beside me? Emm i walk slowly toward the door. And then I saw a tall, handsome, and perfect namja playing basketball alone. He wear the same uniform like me, so it’s right that he one of student in my school. But is he my senior or same year like me? I thought that i’ve seen him before.

‘Dung dung dung ‘ he drible the ball like a pro. Maybe he one of basketball team member but I’m also basketball team member and never see him at practice. Uwaa three point shoot. Uwaaa he can dunk!!! Uwaaa!!

But suddenly he stop and look toward me.

“Ahh you came.... So that’s the end of me” What? What did he said?

He slowly walk toward me with ball in right hand and his bag in his shoulder.

“Thanks for the ball. Good luck with your practice.” He smile. And that smile is most handsome smile that i’ve ever seen. I do remember him. His name is Park Chanyeol. And from that time I start to like him. I like him very much.

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Two years has passed. And my feeling never change. No one know because yaa unlike the other student, I don’t really have much friends. Emm actually I don’t have friends. Although I became the captain of my school basketball team I don’t really get along with other student. But the truth is one person know. She is not my friend. She is my sister. Park Sooyoung.

“Eonni can you give me your meat. Minwoo oppa give me so little. Nee?”

“Emm..”

“Eonni can I borrow your pen? I forgot  to bring my pencil case. I borrow sungjae’s pen before but you know sungjae’s pen is not cute at all.”

“Emmm..”

“Eonni please answer my question properly not just ‘emm’”

“You’re so noisy Sooyoung-ii. Why you always eat at my class?? You have a boyfriend right? Go eat with your boyfriend!!!!”

“YAAA EONNI!!! I eat with tou because i really care about you. I don’t

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rizkiamut
#1
Chapter 27: Finally I finished reading this story.
Park Chanyeol is really lucky. Despite his dumbest decisions, Jiyeon accept his feelings so soon. I want to see Park siblings punch him together hahaha before they live happily ever after *kidding.
Honestly, Yein's character is kind of blur in my head. She had no real and strong intention to split Chanyeon relationship because she wasn't that obsessed to Chanyeol. She disappeared so suddenly after 4 years, so it make the story didnt have enough conflict, especially when I expect some moment of jealousy and others kkkk.
But you made a good characterization about Park siblings very well. Their characters were very consistent. I like it. I enjoyed this story, especially when this is your first time writing in english. I appreciate your hard work and expect more for your upcoming story :)
rizkiamut
#2
Chapter 20: Aw, there is my name (sorry for late reading your note).
Can I at least forget about the real pairing in this story and the ending Jiyeon is going to have? I feel bad for Sehun. He always try to reach Jiyeon's heart but got rejected from Jiyeon.
Aww I dont know how to say. I know I give you advice about Chanyeon, but because I dont know what happen in the next chapter, I am still rooting for Sehun NOW. Just now.
rizkiamut
#3
Chapter 18: Aw. Full Seyeon moment in one chapter is not really good for my heart. And my favorite pair sinks at that moment.
rizkiamut
#4
Chapter 17: Finally I reach the chapter that make you confused, authornim!
Ahhh... if I read this chapter, yes, I want Jiyeon to end up with Sehun. He seems cherish Jiyeon so much more than Chanyeol.
rizkiamut
#5
Chapter 5: Ah just found time to continue reading this story.
I really like their characters. Park siblings are so cute. Chanyeol... cool, handsome, make my heart melt <3
I just dont understand why Chanyeol didnt have cellphone when he was rich. So, it's quite understanding why Park siblings call his reason for not calling and texting Jiyeon are bull.
About Suzy... wow! I didnt expect that. I curious about Minho and Chanyeol relationship, but since in the next chapter maybe i will know about that, i wont ask here hehe.
Ah, one more time. I just hope you will describe more about their moment or when they have conversation. Because I feel the progress in this story is so fast. Maybe for your upcoming story.
But dont worry. I enjoyed this story :)
missright76 #6
Chapter 27: YEAHHHH FINALLY!!!
But i hope you make a short sequal. Hehe.
jiyeonnie77 #7
Chapter 27: Yeaaaaaayyy!!!!!! I wanna cry because of happiness x'D ok no I'm just kidding(?) but I don't know must be happy or sad, because it's already end T_T but I'm happy because Chanyeol and Jiyeon will getting married XD Sehun-ah you're such a good boy '-')b hope you'll find good girl too(?) author nim please make a sequel about their marriage and having child and live happily ever after XD can you make it pleasee~? But if you're busy you don't have to make it(?)
kakito94
#8
Chapter 27: Ending???huaaa,i will miss this story so much..hehe..such a great ending author-nim....i really love it...tq for your great love story...i will wait for midnight snack n your another ff too...:)
K_Tiara #9
Chapter 27: Huaaaa.. Can you give us a sequel about their marriage family.. hahhaha
Good job authornim.. Thank you for your great story~
Waiting for your next story too ♡