The Loss

With Time

 

The doctor said it was normal.

 

The doctor said it was common.

 

The doctor said it was too soon.

 

Her body just wasn’t strong enough to carry another baby, not yet.

 

The doctor said, the doctor said; the doctor said.

 

No amount of rational would soothe Gwiboon’s broken heart.  No amount of logic was enough to ease her tears.

 
 

I'M SORRY OKAY

but you gotta admit... that's an impressive amount of angst for 59 words
i'm kinda proud of myself 
 
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sorry, i'm trying to keep everything chronological order but it's not exactly coming outta my head so neatly :/
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OdetteSwan 936 streak #1
Chapter 11: They are really growing in love and trusting each other. They have even hurdled a very real family problem of losing a source of livelihood.
You may even say at this point that their love is enough.
OdetteSwan 936 streak #2
Chapter 4: I just started reading this. This is so sweet.
I love how you showed their personalities.
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