Breaking Up..is Just So Damn Easy...

After the Rain...Be Happy
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note: okay..i cheat. well, i really do wanted this fic to end as a oneshot....but after i made a basic little trailer(can be seen at foreword) ideas came rushing....n i felt it was such a pity to end it there and then. although i loved how it ended already, it was a lil too heartbreaking for me that i had to continue.... so to whoever who's reading. if you don't like the continuation, it'd be best to consider it had ended at chapter one(which is the original oneshot) will try my best to keep this one up though i have record of not finishing my long-running fics...whew.

 

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'I always thought it was something I wouldn't be able to do, something I wouldn't be able to survive through, but in the end I was the one who started it, and I was the one who ended it as well...it wasn't hard. In fact, it was so easy.'

The door creaked open, shedding a little amount of light in the darkened house's living room.

"Gyuri unnie, you're home? Why are you so late?"

Gyuri turned the lights on and saw the youngest member of the kpop idol group she led, seated at the sofa in the dark.

"Ya...why are you not asleep yet? Just because tomorrow you don't have schedule, doesn't mean you don't have to sleep. There's a little fun thing called school remember?"

"Unnie, i know, but I can't sleep in the room. Hara unnie is snoring, so i had to come out here. Besides, I'm worried about you."

"Ya~ since when does Hara snore?"

"*rollseyes* Well, since forever. I'm the one who sleeps in the same room with her every night."

"I heard you in shimshimtapa just now. Do you still think of him?" Gyuri slowly crept herself next to Jiyoung and leaned towards the latter's shoulders. For warmth, or comfort, she wasn't sure herself.

"Unnie...I was just....wah, what happened? Look at you...you're damp....wet....Why didn't you take an umbrella out?"

"It's okay, I needed the rain..."

Gyuri stood up and walked towards her room. She didn't want to answer to further questions that would ensue.

"Unnie!.......how was your date with Eunhyuk oppa?" Jiyoung gave her best wide grin.

Gyuri didn't answer the question. She only smiled halfheartedly at her door. "I need to sleep now. There's tons of schedule tomorrow. You, little kid...go to sleep now or you'll be punished."

"Yes maam!"

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'Breaking up was such an easy thing to do, but the after-effects it left to this poor little heart... To be honest, I don't know why or what really got into me to hurt him like that just now. It hurt myself as well. Hurt.so.bad.'

Gyuri sunk down to the floor and hugged herself. She wanted to cry, but no tears were coming out. Scenes of what happened earlier replayed before her eyes.

the scene of the sky grew darker and darker while waiting for Eunhyuk, outside the cafe.

the scene of Eunhyuk dancing happily with another girl on a live show while she waited for him.

The raindrops she watched while seated brokenheartedly alone.

The comforting drink.

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guys,a sequel might not happen based on votes,but i'm sharing the trailer,so check my blogpost for it^^

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HoshaTree
#1
Chapter 25: I'm really late to comment on this sorry -.-
I think your writing has improved since this, but I still enjoyed reading a long fic about my bias group! so much kara feels in the last chapter too...
I like the way you write the girl characters as complex, real people. The scheming Jiyoung was quite entertaining!
This is a bit random, but I've always thought Gyuri and Siwan look really similar, like they could be brother and sister. I think it's because they have the same teeth or something? lol, especially when Gyuri dressed as a boy for that drama...
Junseoh
#2
I love siwan.. Im gonna start reading!
rion_01 #3
omg~ i thought it's a coincidence as well.. and i watched both mvs and i had to say, i love both singles^^ super junior and ze:a are ones of my favourite groups and now i just have to wait for kara. i wonder when they're going to release a new korean song. oh well, i thought you're going to post a sequel or something. lol
Ipizzippy #4
Why did I only find this now?! GAH!!! Hahaha. Must start reading.
hopelesswriter #5
@ireneayu: thank you so much for the honest opinion. just the fact that there's a comment made me happy^^. though i guess many who stalked this fic really dislike it.haha.

anyway,about the sequel..i'll be honest...i too have worries about whether i'll be able to be responsible and remain my level of commitment n interest in it if i start it, but at the same time, i developed ideas for it no matter how much i resisted. i guess it's because of the way this fic ended that left so many different possibilities. and the truth is, i already wrote a chapter for the sequel and even made the trailer already. i'm just scared to start something when i'm not certain if i'll be able to end it. i've had those problems with most of my fics...but surprisingly...i'm rekindling feelings for my old fics now after completing this one.XD

so, here's the deal...i'll let the poll posted at the end of this fic to decide.
if i get 20 votes for sequel, i'll go with the sequel.
but if i get 6 votes for no sequel first, we'll just end with the ending here.
till then^^~
ireneayu #6
phew... finally you made it :) congrats. tbh, i vote for no sequel since in my opinion you didn't show the passion to write a long fic. you know if you felt burdened when writing a fic, your readers somehow could feel it, too. and it's not good for the fic's development itself. so, feel confident when you write, then you can worry after ;) comments for each chap surely can help author to improve the update. so pls ppl, give more support to hopelesswriter ♥ she's such a good writer. i like her writing style :)
hopelesswriter #7
@rion_01: Thank you so much again. i don't know what else to say. but i feel very grateful, thankful honoured and lucky whenever anyone likes the fic. ahh..i'm not sure if the ending is disappointing though. but oy~do not apologize for long comments because that's what i love the most. thank you so much again...*hugs*

it finally ended^^.
rion_01 #8
waa..such a beautifully written chapter :') gah! i'm tearing up while reading this *sniff* maybe it's because i'm reading while listening to some kara and infinite ballad songs xD it's like i can feel the pain in each of the characters.. i feel so heartbroken for siwan though, especially T.T i really want to him a hug here.. keke and i almost jumped off from my chair after gyuri said she's getting married with another guy lol xD i wonder who he is.. lucky guy. kya~ you're such an awesome writer. hoping for a nice ending for this fic. hwaiting, chingu/unnie/dongsaeng~! (sorry for the long comment and being such an emo reader lol >.<)
hopelesswriter #9
@rion_01: aww, thanks so much for commenting again. and a long one at that! zomg! i'm so grateful to you, just hope the ending won't disappoint you. btw, i love sweet 2nd lead guys who won't get the girl too...xD thanks so much again for keeping my spirit up to keep writing. <3