Title: 3/5 --- People know who the story is based on. And that will attract the reader that is interested in junsu’s attention.

Poster/Background: 10/10. This fits the theme and the story it can also tell you a bit about the author and what kind of story it’s going to be.

Forewords: 3/5--- Here you just tell us about the characters. You should give us a blurb so the reader actually wants to read on.

Plot: 9/15--- Decent. Not being harsh or anything but I think you could have improved this story it got really good at some points and then boring again. But I think you already see your audience and knew what kind of readers you were expecting. That’s why you wrote this way.

Flow: 8/10--- I really liked how you wrote the story but better cliffhangers would have been good.

Writing Style: 8/10 --- It was good. But like I said before you could have improved it. Develop your own writing style.

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 10/10 --- everything was spelt correctly. Was really impressed.

Characterization: 10/10 --- Since all of them were celebrities was it easy to keep track with everyone. And in the forewords you told us about everyone so we already had some back ground information on them.

Originality: 4/10—This is where you lack.im sorry if this offends you. But you are a good writer it would have been awesome if you had a good plotline. As soon as I read chapter three I had a feeling on how i