Unspoken Jealousy

Description

each person are different from one another. that's a fact that nobody can change. everybody is unique in their own way.

even though some — not all — didn't exactly want to be 'unique'. they want to be just like somebody else: an idol, a scientist, somebody from school, a friend, somebody from the neighborhood, or even somebody in the family. this 'some' mostly would give up almost everything to become somebody else.

why?

because they posess the feeling called jealousy. which means they want to posess something somebody else does. personality, looks, wealth, brain, family, lover, I don't know. this jealousy has no limits.

sometimes... it can be dangerous.

and sometimes, the most dangerous kind of jealousy isn't posessed by those who voice their jealousy out loud; but instead lies in the hearts of those who spoke none of it.


 

"most people don't know, how valuable the spoken words are; how thankful they should be to have their voice heard; because there are people out there who could only keep the things they want to say in their heart until it piles up and bursts in their horrible loneliness,"
-Jung Hee-

"much more than what humans can express through words, it's better to not be able to speak, but have your heart understood rather than being able to express a thousand words that are meaningless to others"
-Jung Chae-

Foreword

sometimes it's better to keep silent than tell others around you just how you feel. because it hurts badly when you know in your heart that they can hear your words but the cannot understand.

 
Author's Note ©
this story is an entry fo Solstice Writing Contest. I'm using prompt no. 1 as quoted beside this note, and pic no. 51; Under Your Sky; as the image shows on the left. this story will probably be chaptered, but idk... >u<
 


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the beautiful poster and background are courtesy from Dancing Daisies Graphic Shop!
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
and last but not least, thanks to Wonder Sky Advertisement and Review shop for reviewing the story!
 
 
 
 
 

 

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Zenitora
#1
Chapter 16: I already am in love with this story. I can't wait for the future chapter.
flamzfox
#2
Hello there!

I’m the host of the Solstice Writing Contest and I’d just like to remind you that the deadline is coming up on June 21st. Your entered work has yet to be completed.

You may request for a two week extension here: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/766703/9/

You may also request that we judge your work in its uncompleted state. However, if you choose to do so, your score will be lowered by 15 points and you will be ineligible for the first place prize. You may however, still be in the running for 2nd, 3rd, or honorable mention. If you wish to do so, please just tell me in a PM back 

Of course, you may always withdraw from the competition but I highly recommend the previously mentioned options instead!

Thanks again and we hope to have the chance to read your entry soon.
itsllllliiiiinnnnnhh #3
Chapter 4: Helloooo ~
I really like how you put the quotes at the beginning of your chapters! I also am in love with the layout of your story because it's so neat o3o. I's just like to point out (I don't mean to hurt your feelings or anything T.T) that you should probably put in some capital letters for the beginning of sentences. Your punctuation is pretty good so far, it's just that one thing that's bothered me >.< I'm sorry! just trying to help ~ Keep going, though, I like the story so far ^.^ Farewell ~