First Meeting

My Angel

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"O-Oh, i-it's fine! Sorry, I didn't see you there." JunQ sputtered out as his cheeks colored to the shade of a ripened tomato.

 

"You may go ahead before us." InSoo said backing up a few steps so JunQ and ChaeJin could get through.

 

  "A-Ah, th-thank you." JunQ said quickly as he bowed to InSoo and GunWoo.

 

  "Thank yew mistewr" ChaeJin said as he lightly tugged on GunWoo's hand, then InSoos, and when each of them looked down at him, ChaeJin smiled one of his sunny, happy go lucky, smiles. When InSoo and GunWoo looked down at ChaeJin they practically melted on the spot. In their head their brains practically melted with thoughts about how cute ChaeJin was.

 

  "Don't forget about me!" SeYong said abruptly as he hugged ChaeJin from behind.

 

  "Oh, Thank yew, too...um..." ChaeJin said to SeYong as his cheeks also colored, but ChaeJin blushed because of the close skinship. ChaeJin blushed harder each time SeYong would accidently blow out his breath onto ChaeJin's sensitive skin, mainly his neck.

 

  "Alright, SeYong, you can let go of him. I'm sure they must be getting ready to go to class, just like us." GunWoo said as he pried SeYong from ChaeJin, then apologizing to ChaeJin about SeYongs behavior.

 

  "Ah, right, ChaeJin we need to get you to class before you're late. That wouldn't be good to be late on your first day, right, Jinnie?" JunQ asked ChaeJin.

 

  "Yeah, Umma!" ChaeJin said loudly and grabbed JunQ's hand.

 

  "Please excuse us" JunQ excused them and ushered ChaeJin inside quickly. 

 

  "They'wre nice, Umma" ChaeJin said with a wide smile.

 

  "Yes they are" 'I hope I meet them again...' JunQ added in his head.

 

  "Look Umma! It's the fiwrst gwadewrs doowr!" ChaeJin pulled JunQ towards the door.  JunQ allowed ChaeJin to pull him over towards the door, but once there he stopped and crouched down in front of ChaeJin.

 

  "You ready to go in? Without me?" JunQ asked, but he regretted it as soon as he let the words out. He hadn't meant to say 'without me' out loud.  Once ChaeJin heard those two words he wrapped his arms around JunQ's neck.

 

  "What's wrong? You were so happy to be here just a few minutes ago. Why are you sad now?" JunQ asked as ChaeJin tightened his hold around JunQ's neck.

 

  "But I dought yew were going to come wiff me...And stay wiff me here...." ChaeJin sniffled. "Do yew weawy haff ta go...?" ChaeJin half whined.

 

  "Sorry, ChaeJin, but I do have to leave. It's time for you to be a big boy. You need to learn to go on without me. I won't always be here to help you out, or stay by your side so you can be comfortable. You need to step out of your comfort zone, okay?" JunQ tried to coax ChaeJin off of him but when he noticed it wasn't working he continued. "That means that you need to move on. With. Out. Me."

 

  As JunQ managed to pull ChaeJin off of him, ChaeJin started to cry. JunQ KNEW he shouldn't have said anything. He regret everything he said as soon as he saw ChaeJin's face. JunQ felt like the worst person in the world, as if he had just committed the worst crime in the history of the world, and no one would ever be able to do anything worse no matter what they did. JunQ could hardly stand looking at him. As ChaeJin was crying and sobbing he started to say things, but JunQ could not understand what he was saying. The only words he caught were '....Yew hate me noooowwww.....!' before ChaeJin started to cry crocodile tears.

 

  "Wai-wai-wai-wai-wait! I could never hate you, remember! I love more than anything in this world!" JunQ exclaimed, frantically trying to get ChaeJin to stop crying. "umm...ummm......"

  

  "You don't have to go in there alone." JunQ heard someone say from behind him. He craned his neck to look behind him and he saw the little boy from earlier, SeYong. "I'll stay with you. You'll be okay with me, right? I'll be your best friend!" SeYong said.

 

  "Y-Y-Yew....w-wiwl...?" ChaeJin asked shakily as he wiped his tears away, though he still sniffled and let a few sobs slip past his lips.

 

  "Yeah! Of course I will! Oh, my name is SeYong!" SeYong introduced himself, somewhat.

 

  "O-Okay...." ChaeJin said. "I'm ChaeJin, this is my Umma."

 

  "oh, I'm JunQ, it's nice to meet you, SeYong. Please take good care of ChaeJin while I am not around." JunQ said politely to SeYong.

 

  "Oh, and this is my idiot Hyong, GunWoo," SeYong pointed to GunWoo. "and this is his friend InSoo." SeYong finished then grabbed ChaeJin's hand. "Let's go play ChaeJin!" 

 

  "Oh, okay, SeYong." ChaeJin said, but before he left he hugged JunQ and kissed him on the cheek. "Bye bye, Umma. I wuv yew."

 

  "I love you too, ChaeJinnie." JunQ replied as SeYong practically dragged ChaeJin behind him and continued to talk.

 

  JunQ stood up straight and looked at InSoo and GunWoo. 

 

  "So we meet yet again" GunWoo said amused. 


 
  "I guess so..." JunQ said awkwardly.

 

  "We're terribly sorry about SeYong's clingy-ness. He tends to do that to anyone he thinks is cute or he thinks that they are a trustworthy person. He used to cling to me everyday when I would visit him..." InSoo said as he rubbed the back of his neck.

 

  All of a sudden JunQ's cellphone went off and he excused himself to answer it.  After a few minutes JunQ came back and told them that he had to leave for work. With that JunQ left the school building and went to work.

 

 

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A/N: Sorry that ended so awkwardly, I kinda ran out of ideas....so....yeah.... Also I'm sorry this is shorter than my other chapters. This is the third chapter I've uploaded today so I'm kinda running low on resources.....Hopefull I'll be back and at it soon. Oh, I also may not get on again this week due to school. I should be back on on the weekend, though.

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Amalya #1
Chapter 11: Interesting story overall. It's not typical and I rather enjoyed the way you had the setup of JunQ and ChaeJin being brothers; the same thing with GunWoo and SeYong. They make rather adorable siblings any which way you look at it. Poor Insoo being left alone except as a sort of adopted brother. hehe

One of my big questions currently would be, when did their mother die? Maybe I'm being picky about details, but usually, if neither of the children are 'adults,' they tend to go to a close relative. I also felt it was strange for ChaeJin to perpetually call JunQ 'Umma.' I mean, he had a mother previously, so shouldn't he still be big brother, unless ChaeJin was just an infant at the time, which would bring me back to the first question.

Beyond that, the story moved a little fast and it felt like they all became really close almost immediately. There was lots of blushing and ducking of heads and 'want to see him again' thoughts pretty much right off the bat. It was cute, but it felt a little forced. haha Moving on, I think the idea was nice though. Having JunQ meet InSoo and all that made for a good pairing and there was a lot of ground to build on between them. The fluffy bits of SeYong and ChaeJin were stupidly adorable and almost ridiculous in their extremes but some kids are like that. lol

I'm inclined to like the alternate ending more, not just because it's less depressing, but because it makes more sense in my head. I'll get to that in a second. You could certainly build a sequel off of either but I would recommend slowing things down and taking your time more. You don't have to power through the story in as short a space of time as possible. Let the characters grow and develop a bit. Feel free to give us more insight from their perspective too. Your inserts are humorous at times, but they do somewhat detract from the focus of the story.

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DGNA_Forever #2
I just saw your poster. I LOVE IT!!<3
DGNA_Forever #3
Chapter 11: I loved this ending, too. It was sweet and cute. I would love to see a sequel to either one, and this story is great. Thank you! Saranghae<3.
InQ-Fluffy-King #4
Chapter 11: INQ SMUFF INQ SMUFF INQ SMUFF INQ SMUFF INQ SMUFF!!!!!
Plz and thank you senpai
DGNA_Forever #5
Chapter 10: It was a beautiful, wonderful, sad journey and I loved the story. It was beautifully written. Thank you for writing it. Saranghae<3.
NurulHs_ #6
Chapter 10: I really like the story. Its so cute and sad in the end, good job author-nim.
DGNA_Forever #7
Chapter 9: I'm in shock right now...You killed them!! WOW...Nice update, though. I can't wait to see where you will go from here. My babies, though...*cries*<3<3.
InQ-Fluffy-King #8
Chapter 9: WHYYYYYY!!!! WHY SIWONS GOD WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
DGNA_Forever #9
Chapter 8: Yah! I was reading and you end on a damn cliff-hanger? Boo...I like how InSoo isn't shy about kissing JunQ, at all. This chapter was nice...until the cliff-hanger:( Evil. Update soon, please:)
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