Disaster

My shining star.

It takes one hour to reach to Luhan's party. You are kinda worried about today. Today is Minseok's special day and he is the prince for today. Everyone in the party are so excited to celebrate it because Minseok doesn't like party. It just, Luhan wants to celebrate with all his friends after long time. 

''Wait, is this Luhan's party venue?'' he asks you as he thought the party would be at Luhan's house. 

You smile, ''just follow me. I am your guide.''

'''.... and my girlfriend. ''

You chuckles, ''.. yes I am.''

''Okay, let's go.''

 

Luhan and Kris are waiting for both of you in front of the main door. Luhan asks the DJ to play Minseok's favourite songs. 

Luhan and Kris open the door; the first step he takes into the room, all the people in there singin HAPPY BIRTDAY song including you. Lay and Tao bring the cake to him as they wants him to make a wish and blow the candles.

You are with Sulli at the back watching Minseok and his geng laughing happily. 

''Are you happy seeing them?'' you ask Sulli.

''Of course I do. It's hard to see them laugh and having fun like this. All of this, thanks to you.'' she says. 

You look at her; full of question. ''Why me?'' 

''Not a thing.'' 

 

You walk to the food section because you're hungry. You are food ghoster. You eat, eat and keep eating. Someone come to you and hold your wrist. ''Stop it. You eat a lot.'' Jongdae scolds you. 

''Jongdae, why are you here?'' you ask him.

He takes the foods from you. ''Just because. Why are you care about me?'' 

You scoff, ''Then it's up to me to eat or not.'' 

''Jongdae. Are you not going to say Happy Birthday to Minseok?'' a girl approaches him as she hugs his arms. 

Because of that girl, you lost appetite. 

''Oh, this is Song Jihyo. and she is Kim Yuna, my partner.'' 

You look at her, ''Ha nice to meet you but gotta go.''

''Woah, what a rude girl'' Yuna tells him after you reject to shake him with her. 

 

''Ha cham, Jongdae. he always ruin my mood.'' you mumble as your hand reach to take the winde. 

But before you can drink it, Jongdae once again take it from you. ''Can you not drink it? You don't know how to drink.'' 

''It-is-non-of-your-business. Gimme back'' you try to take the wine from him. but he stops you. He pulls you to the rooftop. 

Minseok saw he pulls you and his heart aching so much. He drinks half of the wine and kinda drunk. He go to the rooftops where Jongdae pulls you. 

''What is wrong with you, Jongdae??'' you push him after he let your hand go. 

''... because it is hurt to see you with someone else.'' he says but you couldn't hear it correctly because you have drink a bit. 

''I'm Kim Minseok's girlfriend. His girlfriend.'' 

''....and you have your own girlfriend. So mind your business!''

Jongdae pulls you into his hug when you suddenly crying. He tries to calm you down but Minseok punch him. 

''Can-can you for just one day not take her from me?! I just want to be with her! I want her!'' he shouts. 

Jongdae couldn't hold his anger when he punch him. He punch Minseok, ''No. She is mine!''

Both of the are figthing. 

You run towards Jongdae and slap him. ''Jongdae-ah. can you at least, try to understand him? Today is his birthday. I don't want to meet you. I hate you.''

 He rolls his eyes; disbelief what you did to him . ''You slap me because of him. All right Jihyo. You and me, we are over. We are stranger from today.'' 

 

You help Minseok stands up and bring him to the chair after Jongdae has leave. ''Are you okay, minseok?'' you ask him. 

He hugs you and you could feel his tears fall on your shoulder. ''don't go. Don't leave me. It's hurt.'' 

You pat his shoulder, ''Is okay, I won't leave you. I will heal the wounds.'' 

''But i'm afraid I will you give more pain'' 

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ivoryy #1
Chapter 31: wait is this already completed? Okayyyy so jihyo and jongdae knew each other and they acknowledge that they knew each other before. I just have one question. What does Minseok means when he said, the 'chance'? it seems like there's something mystery in there. Or is it suppose to stay a mystery?
ivoryy #2
Chapter 29: Aaah!! Aah!! Aah!! I remember now!! I read this TWO YEARS AGO! Wayyy before I started to write my own fanfics. I think you stop half way before deciding to continue again. I apologize for my slow brain teheeeee. I love this fanfic so much! The feels between jihyo, jongdae and minseok are so real!!
ivoryy #3
Chapter 21: Waiiittttt I thought jihyo like jongdae more than she likes minseok.. jongdae-ah you're so cringy..... You watch the drama because of jihyo oh my heart Lord help
ivoryy #4
Chapter 20: But, he swiftly hugged your waist and put his chin on your shoulder. He whispered to you before let you off, ‘’I will do it again one day. Although you hate me, I don’t care because I hate you too. But, please don’t disappear like this and make me worried about you. I hate it. I-I just.. nevermind. Go rest your body. Goodnight. I hate you so much.’’

. That I hate you so much part got me squeal real hard :-P
ivoryy #5
I saw this fanfic updated. And I don't even know when did I hit the subscribe button to this story.
But you know what. I'm glad that I 'accidentally'? Subscribe to this.. The description and foreword already caught my attention! I feel so sorry to myself and guilty to you for not reading this fanfic sooner. :-( I'm looking forward to binge reading this!! ;-)
Zuhann
#6
Updatee more .... fighting author -nim
seung97 #7
Chapter 27: Loves the updates
Huhitscorn #8
Chapter 27: I love it please update more^^ fighting
novelyn #9
Chapter 27: Please Update......
stephanie1138 #10
Chapter 27: Love it but please update soon. (^_^)