Shot Down

Description

Jiho's shot at some administrative office, gunmen barging in shooting at everyone and everything. Jaehyo end up trapped inside the building with his shot leader and several more hostages; gunmen all around the place for obscure reasons. 

It's not like Jaehyo cares about the why of their presence here, as Jiho could be dying in his arms if these men don't shoot him dead first. 

Taken hostage in a building by seven armed, dangerous men; Jaehyo and Jiho fought for their survival, surrounded by corpses and terrified hostages as helpless and powerless as them.

This is no movie, and playing superhero's out of the question... even if having one of those guns in these men's hands would be awesome; one shot Block B member is far enough in Jaehyo's opinion.   

Foreword

 

Sneak Peek :
 
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       "There was people running away from everywhere, screams coming from every directions as gun shots were fired and gruff voices heard above the ambient panic."
 
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      "Pushing Yukwon forward and dodging whatever could be flying above his head; Jiho did not understand what happened next when a sharp pain crossed his body and sent him crashing on the floor; utter confusion hitting him until the next clear thing registering in his mind being the atrocious pain in his side."
 
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      "He saw Jaehyo crawl to a bleeding Jiho on the floor, at least five gunmen organizing themselves to block the building’s every access [...] the last image left of their two friends being one of Jaehyo pulling Jiho closer to him as a gunman walked to them."  
 
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      "There was blood everywhere [...] So he pressed his hand harder against the wound; groaning at the pain he inflicted himself. But he needed to stop the blood flowing out of him."
 
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      "« NO ! » He screamed, lunging forward when the gunman loaded his weapon and aimed it at his younger [...] « Please... Don't kill him ! » [...] « And why not ? He’s shot, he’s suffering… It’s the human thing to do.» Jaehyo heard the man’s weapon ready itself for a shot. « NO ! »"
 
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      "« Would you die for him ? »"

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Okay, so here's a little preview of what will happen, and could happen as your imagination's certainly pretty well teased xD.
 
It's a piece of work I just started, after a dream I had where Jiho was shot at some point
(Yes, I dreamt about Jiho being shot T.T I don't even know why myself)
(and you know what's worst ? The scene appeared out of nowhere in my dream...one second I was running -yes I have pretty intense dreams of me being shot and trying to survive, but whatever- so I was running and then I turned around and saw Jiho being shot and end up on the floor in a pool of blood)
What a lovely dream, don't you think ? 
...
 
So, now everyone knows I'm weird and crazy... let's talk about the story a bit =)
 
I didn't mark it [M] because well, I'm kind of used to write rated stories and this one doesn't fit in this category in my opinion
(at least based on my completely ed up perception of shocking events -I am not easily shocked and while writing this foreword I'm starting to doubt if I should rated it or not-)
(because only in my foreword I could be using foul language and I don't think it's suitable for non-rated stories -I'm restraining myself here to keep it soft !!-)
 
So don't hesitate to tell me if I should rate it or not because of some foul language, blood and violence
(as I won't be uncomfortable reading it with my parents, so... I'm confused lol)
 
 
Besides that, it's a Jaeco/Zihyo or whatever the pairing's called friendrship/hurt-comfort fiction. 
You'll see some UBomb friendship too.
And I don't know yet about the others, they'll appear maybe at some point, but I'm not sure yet.
 
And, I'm posting this foreword only because I wanted to let people know this kind of story will come out, but I'm just starting the story, and I have others to post too... so I don't know when the first chapter will be out. 
Maybe if you're really motivated or interested I'll be as much as you and post pretty quickly, but I don't know.
We'll see ^^
 
What else should I say ? 
 
I think I already said everything I had to, so if you have questions or whatever, just ask me and I'll answer as long as I'm not spoiling the story.
 
Please,
 
COMMENT/SUBSCRIBE/UPVOTE&ENJOY 
 
Bye =)
 
 
 
 

 

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Mena2013 #1
Chapter 10: Dear lord have mercy, this was beautiful!! Right from the start!
I loved it and I love you for writing it! You just got a fan for life.. (no pressure meant.. really!) <3
Mena2013 #2
Chapter 9: "My lips are precious" hahahaha so Jiho and so true..!! Hahaha other than his rap writing mind, his lips and mouth got to be the most precious!hahahha
Mena2013 #3
Chapter 6: Ohhh I wanna know whats the other Block B fiction you mentioned you were writing... not that it matters.. I'll probably end up reading everything you ever wrote.. hahahah
Mena2013 #4
Chapter 6: This chapter was my killer..!! Hahah my imagination went wild with every single line and to just think of my beloved Jiho in such position.....
Thank you thank you thank you for writing this!!
Mena2013 #5
Chapter 2: And to think that I actually thought I can go through this without crying.. :'( 2nd chapter and tears are already forming.. :'((
chocolakay #6
Chapter 9: noooo... poor jaehyo didn't even confess. ahh...
chocolakay #7
Chapter 8: WHERE IS JAE? OMG! please be safe dear pretty boy. and that girl too.
icywolf #8
Chapter 7: Noo!!! ㅠㅠ --->my reaction after reading thr last line.... I love this chapter! It had me on the edge of my seat! Please keep up the good work! I can't wait for the next update!!
chocolakay #9
Chapter 7: did he just... just pour soda to taeil's aquarium? can someone be dumber than this? jiho?

and monday is killing jae? or both?

no definetly no right?
icywolf #10
Chapter 6: Monday... I hate you! OMG I love this! Finally the other members can see what is happening ! Damn anti-fans...I hope you keep up the good work! Thanks for the great update and I can't wait for more!