[DISCONTINUED] That Corner Hides a Pair of Eyes

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"I thought this would be one of those cold yet sunny peacefull monday mornings, but it wasnt. 

First thing in the morning, they're already picking on a helpless student. 
They have been doing this since i got here. They even asked me to tag along. But i wasnt that low, so i declined. But i have to admit, he's making my life here a little interesting. 
 
They tell him that he had his father's murderous eyes. He has a weak heart too. So he really cant do anything for himself.
I watch him get beat up everyday, in diffrent places, in diffrent times. 
He would look like a corpse by friday, and a goodlooking man when its monday.
 
He was pinned down by hoya's foot. I can see him struggling to break free from hoya's push. But it only made hoya go harder on him. 
 
"Gyu has no eyes!!" I heared one of the students say. 
"Silly!! he has eyes idiot!! but they're the eyes of a murderer!" They all laughed at him and nodded their heads as if they are agreeing.
 
After a few minutes of 'teasing' him, He was  dragged by his hair to the school rooftop. To disappear in the eyes of the spectators. My guess is that, they'll punch the living daylights out of him. And it was early in the morning too. Some people just have no life.
 
This suffering angel, his name, kim Sunggyu."

Foreword

WARNING:

DISPLAYS EXTREME(?) VIOLENCE.

DISPLAYS EXTREME(?) ANGST.

READ AT YOUR OWN RISK (?)

NO . . UNLESS SOMEONE IS WILLING TO TEACH ME HOW TO WRITE THEN, IS HIGHLY POSSIBLE -grins-

My first fanfic . . . 

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khaulabear #1
I love every bits of this story..the way you write makes my heart broke.. pleaseee update i'll be waiting! Im an angst lover and this is a perfection
emholic
#2
Chapter 18: Hope you can update soon authornim!!! Fighting!!!
akitou
#3
Chapter 18: hoya have feelling to gyu....????
akitou
#4
Chapter 12: i luv this story authornim.... so keep writing. coz this great story
pinkespluescheinhorn
#5
Chapter 18: Hey there ^-^

So I just found your story and got about 2h of sleep because of it, bless you!
I am a fan of angsty highschool drama stuff and I literally just wanted to kill Woohyun in the last chapter xD And I actually think Hoya isn't as bad as he seems. Because I like Hoya and he can't be bad!
I'm writing a comment because I got into your story and you build up a nice suspence and I hope, that maybe the next update will come soon. I really look forward to it ^-^
btw I think Hoya will have a clue whose Hyuns friend really fast and I think if maybe Hoya and Hyun are going to be friends, he'll leave Gyu. Or Hoya is like the 2nd male lead.
About Sunny, I think Gyu really couldn't do anything and he definitely didn't do anything on purpose, because he liked her and let her go with Hoya.
Oh, what's with the cousin who should have arrived by now I think? He hadn't appeard yet. And somehow I belive it's L ~
Well, looking at the other comments, this is quite long but I'll hope for another chapter so... You did well ^-^