1998; Fall

Floral Rain
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"Minu ya, Minu!!! Wae are you running away?"   "Because you stink! Don't come here. Go away!"     "Taehun-ah! It's lunch time? What are you doing there alone? Let's eat. I brought lots of food."   "..."   "Yah, Taehun! Where are you running to?"   "Tch, why are they all running away? Nobody wanna eat with me?"   Seeing him all alone there, my heart sank. How could they treat him in such a jerky way? What's wrong with him? He was just trying to be friendly. He was just trying to be nice. He was just asking for some love. What was so wrong about it? Sure he's not the handsomest or cutest kid at school but that didn't mean he deserved to be treated with such cruelty.    In fact, I had always wanted to be his friend, ever since I saw him happily playing alone around the house while his mother scolded him endlessly, the day I came to Korea from the comfort of my family back in Australia, almost a year ago. Mum told me that she and Dad would come here when they've settled the business there and that I should live with my aunt first, here. But I doubt they're coming any time soon. They still haven't. I knew they're busy and didn't want me to be lonely there, and I knew they're faced with some financial problems and didn't want me to be involved there so they sent me here, all alone.   And the day I arrived at my aunt's house, an aunt I've never met my whole life, I saw this bright kid next door. Him. I was feeling lost, sad for being ditched here, angry at my parents for leaving me alone here with a family that didn't seem to welcome me that much, lonely for being alone, and it took all of my strength to not break down.   But the moment I saw his laughter, without noticing, a small smile crept onto my face, as I ogled him, feeling amused more than anything. I only noticed I could've done something wrong when he suddenly stopped running around and stared hard at me, before his frown turned into a weirdo face. And he went inside his house, leaving me all alone again, outside my aunt's house.   Ever since then, I had only dared to watch him from afar. Finding him at school was the easiest thing since he was always somewhere seen, putting himself out there, whether acting in school play, being the mascot during sports day, or even being the host or do some comedic acts whenever there's any event in school. I also noticed how friendly he was to other kids. Yet, the strange thing was, nobody seemed to want to be his friend. Nobody even bothered about him. Heck, as you could see, they couldn't even be nice to him. But why? Why were they so mean towards somebody who didn't do anything wrong to them? I could never understand. I became very curious and puzzled. And thus, I would spend most of my time at school just watching him and how other kids treat him. There were so many things I wanted to know. Yet, I could never bring myself to approach him. We were so close, in a sense. We even sat in the same classroom. Yet, it felt like we weren't even in the same world.    He talked to everyone but me. At first, I thought it was because I was the new kid and it's normal to ostracize new kids, here. But then Minwoo the rude jerk transferred here, about two months after I did. And as you had seen, spoken to him rudely. He welcomed Minwoo, he even approached him on the day he arrived here. But he never spoke to me, not even once. Even Taehun, the quietest kid in this school, probably said hi to me, once. Just a hi, but not even him, who was the
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Noona1969 #1
Reading this in 2018. Are you still writing? I think you should, because your stories are almost perfect.
I generally avoid stories, but this was beautifully done. This was so believable. How their friendship unfolded. Even the relationship was believable.
Such a beautiful character you made for Kwanghee. My favorite image was of him seriously tending to the flowers. Oh, and him holding the umbrella. And the floral rain.
I don't cry over stories, because the professional editor/writer in me is always on, but this story made me cry. Thanks for sharing.
I hope you read this in 2018, and feel inspired to write a beautiful saga (HeeCheol-centric, perhaps?).
SilenceMaker #2
Chapter 20: Sorry, but I couldn't bring myself to read the last chapter. Hell, I didn't even finish reading Kwanghee's diary!!!!! And I just can say that I hate you so, so, so, so much. I ing sobbed with this story, okay?! YOU BROKE MY HEART IN PIECES!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS TOO MUCH BUT I SO WANT TO PUNCH YOU IN THE FACE. But congratulations for the great story. It was absolutely depressing, but really beautiful and well written. Thank you a lot for writing it. But I still want to punch you.

-Greetings, the reader who's still crying her eyeballs out.
AyeeKon #3
Chapter 20: I just ended to read this. I'm still with a rollercoaster of emotions. I just...
Thanky you so much for this beautiful writting. It was one of the most worthy readings I've ever had. I enjoyed so much this, and be sure I'm gonna read it again and again. n_ n

Congratulations for the amazing work <3 I really enjoyed it♥
HoshaTree
#4
Chapter 20: And so ends a great journey... T.T
I have to thank you for writing this, because it is such an epic work, and so much careful thought and attention to detail was included. You can't say that you're not much of a romance writer, because this is the most epic of epic romances! Of course it was melodramatic, but I was totally drawn into it.
It is a sad ending, but at least Kevin seems at peace, right? Anyway I'm going to believe they will be together in another life lol~
I look forward to reading more of your fics in the future ^^
AsheMikami
#5
Chapter 20: *Virtually sending out punches* Halmeoni, y....youuuuuuuuuu......should be jailed for having such a stupendous writing talent ;__; meh, this isn't fair for both Kevin and Kwanghee, I must say. Anyway, the storyline is literally yours to manipulate so I don't have any rights to object ;D The ending however, is beyond expectation! Oh maynnn, gimme some tissues and I'm gonna blow out my internal organs along. Hahaha

I cried, yes. Kwanghee's death is too terrible to be true albeit the cause of his death is kinda common ;__; *cries again* and Kevin, ummm....i'm still curious about his true ual orientation xD bhahahaha ._.

Anyhoo I'm still glad he's married to a WOMAN tho they later divorced. Mehhh xD

Thanks for the credit btw, but I still feel uneasy abt my posters! Pffft. Hahaha, wait until SPM ends and I'll make loads of nice posters for ya, halmeoni!
I'm glad I subscribed to this fic ;__________; *cries a river* Now it's over, so I'm anticipating for more ;D
Thanks for writing such a magnificent(and heartrending) fic! <3 <3 <3 Congrats for its completion too!
pikarina
#6
Chapter 17: *pardon the comment spree but studying keeps making me fall asleep so here to procrastinate :P*
Gahhhhh i.. i... i... I HATE YOU !!! Sampainya hatimu membuat kwangie begitu... sobs sobs. Ok. this somehoe reminds me of what my addmaths teacher said, "dont think too much, its actually a simple question" and it is... just like Kevin, he should have just looked at the bigger picture instead of just scruntinizing t that one particular goal... AND WHAT DID YOU MEAN IT DIDNT TURN OUT AS HEARTBREAKING AS YOU PLANNED ?!! YOU MEAN WHAT YOU PLANNED WAS MORE HEARTBREAKING THAN THIS ??!!! DA FUDGE WOMAN.
avenge96
#7
Chapter 17: this is so beautiful T.T
pikarina
#8
Chapter 16: AUSHHSBSNJDBB *slaps self* ABSNJDNDNBXBDB *dunks head in ice water* HSJHZBBXBXBBD *drinks coffee* THE FUDGE ??!!! HOW COULD YOU ??!!!! KWANGIE T.T
(sorry for not commenting earlier but i was busy)
Okay.... ive read so many fics of lots of pairing but seriously, ive never squealed as passionately as i did while reading this. Even when im reading Heewan, and heck, even Moonwoo !! But for Kevkwang, man i squealed like crazy. Hdbhxbxbdbfjf and idk why, but everyrime you they kissed, i felt a pang in my heart because of the innocence and purenest. And when Kevin started pikir bulan bukan, i seriously had the urge to slap some sense into that pretty head of his. Stop overthinking Kebin !
AyeeKon #9
Chapter 16: Wooo so intense ;;A;; Just the thought of Kwanghee lying on the road makes me cry. So sad.

And Kevin . _. Why so stupid? ;;; You finally had him and you screwed it up ;;;;

Thanks for the amazing chap : D I'm looking forward the next one *-*
HoshaTree
#10
Chapter 16: omg I hate you! How can you do this to me? T_T
Is it almost the end? I haven't quite decided what the meaning of all this is... but I guess Kevin is crazy, and a hypocrite >.<
Anyway, thanks for the update even though you killed me. The details here were really good, but painful lol