Chapter 17

You can't (Jinki ver.)

 

"Don't go..." was all I managed to say

"Jinki what are you talking about ?" his voice was soft 

"Just d-don't go I beg you" he got on his knees and hold my cheeks in his hands

"Look at me" I did as he said. His eyes were full of worry and looked so gentle

"What's wrong ?" Luna and Jonghyun came back "Why is Jinki crying ?" I heard Luna mutter something like 'he just wants attention'

"Nothing I can't handle so could you leave us alone please ? I will manage it alone"

"No, we will stay" Luna said "who knows what he's gonna do" I could feel the grip on my cheeks thighten but didn't care 'cause I was still crying

"I said leave. Us. Alone" I could hear the anger in his voice

"Luna I think we should really go now" Jonghyun said but... Why are girls so persistent ?

"No, I don't want to"

"GO AWAY" Minho screamed giving them a shock and caused me to cry harder "Oh sorry I-I didn't want to... Don't cry Jinki please I'm sorry don't cry. Jonghyun can you take Luna away we will come to the location afterwards okay ?"

"Okay. Oh by the way Vic thought it would be best if we go to the same bar were we met the other day so just go there when everything is okay again"

"Thank you" both of them left... Finally "So what's wrong ? Talk to me please"

"D-don't go..."

"Were should I go ? I'm here right ? So why are you saying that ? Please talk to me" he put his arms around me and pulled me to his chest. It's weird that I think he smells good when he just sweated like a sumo ringer. He carassed my head 

"Y-you can't go Minho" my voice was broken and weak. It's embarassing to show myself like this to someone but it's not like I can control everything

"Calm down Jinki and tell me were I can't go okay ? So breath in breath out" I did as he said and slowly became calm again the tears were still falling but it was better. "You okay again ?" I nod "Then talk to me" 

"What should I say ?" that's a dumb question but I didn't want to answer so why not play the innocent dumb little child

"Are you kidding me ? Why are you crying ?" I was silent while my tears faded away leaving a little track of my tears on my cheeks and one wet spot on his shirt behind "You said don't go... What did you mean by that ?" I blushed

"Nothing that was just something I said out of the mood" I could see he didn't belive me "Let's go Minho I the others are waiting" he followed me "Were are we meeting ?"

"Your work place" Leeteuk's bar ? That's good Leeteuk can watch Luna. We went to the bar and the others were sitting already

"Minho promise me something..."

"What ?"

"I want you to sit next to me and away from Luna so she can't reach your drink and don't drink too much"

"I don't understand but I promise you" I smiled. The other three were talking about I don't know what. We sat down so that I was sitting next to Jonghyun with Minho opposide of me and Vic beside him. Luna sat next to her so not too close to Minho

"So what can I bring you ?" Eunhyuk was working totday too. Everyone ordered beer only I didn't. "The usually for you ?" he turned to me and I nod "Okay then. 4 Beers, orange juice and Leeteuk are about to come just a little moment" I smiled  

"He knows your usually ?" Minho asked looking after Eunhyuk  

"Of course he does" the four of them chatted while I waited for Leeteuk to come to me

"JINKI BABY" and here he is of course with all the attention directed at him including my friends. I laughed "How come your eyes are red ? Something happen ?" he paniced

"Long story anyway I have a favor to ask you" I bend over so I was facing his hear and wispered "Could you keep an eye on Luna for me ? She's the girl that's sitting next to Minho. Don't look over or it will be obivously" he nod and I smiled at him. Minho eyed us weird but didn't say anything

"Oh Jinki by the way Joon is here"

"Joon ?" the five of us asked in sync but all in another way

"Yes, only for a little while but he's here"

"Tell him to come out so we can talk" he nod and went back to work after a while the said man came... Joon

"Hey little child how are you ?" he ruffled my hair "Hello I'm Joon. Nice to meet you" they introduced themself "So something interesting happen while I was away ?"

"Nothing much. You know Eunhae became real" his eyes widen 

"Really ? it was about freaking time that the two of them finally confess. It was totally obivously how much they love each other" we laughed 'cause that's so true "What about you ?"

"What about me ?" I know what he means but... Minho is here so no comment

"You know what I mean" I gave him a look that told him everything. He shouldn't talk more 'cause the person he's asking about sits at the table. Joon understood that without problems and gave me a nod together with a smirk that I wanted to punch off his face 

"How come you are here ?"

"A friend of mine is moving to another city and I'm here to help him so I thought why not visiting my old friends at the bar ?" we laughed. There were a few times were I looked at Minho to see if Luna already seduced him but no to my surprise Minho's gaze was fixed on me so everytime I looked at him out eyes meet again what I noticed thought is that Victoria went beside Jonghyun which meant minho was between Luna and Joon. After a while Leeteuk came to us and talked too "My neighbour is so weird he is actually walking his fishbowl around town" we laughed and had fun

 

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From: Joon

To: Jinki

So tell me who's the lucky one out of these people you like ?

 

From: Jinki 

To: Joon

Minho the one that sat beside you. Black hair pretty face, tall, lots of muscle...
you know who I mean right ?

 

From: Joon

To: Jinki

Oh that one ? Good catch ;)
Seems like you have a chance by after all he looked at you like he would kiss you any moment ^^ 

 

I blushed at that last sentence...

 

We were curently walking home Vic and Jjongie excused themself earlier... I wonder what they are doing but I know Jonghyuns parents aren't home... They won't... Right ? Jonghyun's leg is broken so I think it's a little difficult

"Minho isn't your house in another direction so why you walk with us ?" she's right his house isn't even near ours

"You didn't know I will sleep at Jinki's house tonight"

"WHAT ?" we asked in sync. I never heard about that but Minho just smiled sheeply while Luna became angry I know Minho didn't notice but I did

"Oh okay... I have to go that way" she said and... I can't believe what she did... Her revenge is the worst and I felt like tearing up again "bye Minho" she kissed him afterwards for 5 ing seconds... and that were 10 seconds too long. Minho was shocked ? I don't know but I didn't care and turned around walking to my house

"Jinki wait" he walked after me but I ignored him "Jinki..." we didn't talk till we arrived at my house

"Good night" I wanted to go inside but he held my arm  

"Wait" I raised an eyebrown "Are you angry ?"

"Well you were the one that promised me you wouldn't go near her but in the end she was sitting beside you and had the chance to kiss you just now so yes, Minho I am angry"

"First of all she was the one that kissed me and I was shocked what should I do, Second you didn't even talk to me in the bar all you cared about was Joon" 

"Joon hyung isn't in love with me" I fighted back

"Who knows ?" 

"He isn't. He's a friend of us that worked at the bar before he moved away nothing more"

"And that text massage was from him too right ?" I nod "Why did you blush if he's just a friend ?" he noticed that ?... 

"Because he wrote something embarassing" I laughed bitterly "I can't even understand why we fight about that it's not like we are a couple" he didn't say anything after that till...

 

"I like you..."

 

The End

 

 


 

'You can't (Jinki ver.)' is actually a complete story and I know it's a bad thing to end it like this but it will be continue in Minho's ver so if you want to know what Jinki's reaction is you have to wait and read the other story. I will put the link here again:

You can't (Minho's ver.)   that actually means Minho's story will have about one or two more chapters than Jinki's. part will also be in the other one even if only one or two want to read I will do it for the two people who want it ^^ 

if you don't want to know then yeah this story is complete. Thank you for reading and supporting it means a lot for me ^^ and you always make me smile with your comments ^o^ so thank you all even silent readers

 

laurachoileto: I just wrote and at the no words part I thought about you and had to put you in there xD glad it made you happy ^^ I think that end is far more frustrating xD

SnHiromi: My is crap but anyway I will write it ^^ it would be hilarious if I made them drunk and ing xDD 

meandmyslef: Don't worry about late commenting. I'm happy enought that you commented :) well Minho confessed that leaves Jinki :)

xeber_97: She's still annoying hopefully it will change soon :) I'm a ert too... xD

erinlm515: I updated ^o^

mirr-a: Luna apologizing I think that will have to wait a little

Dubuleaderonew: I love you too my reader ^^

DAEBAKmama: You are so sweet Thank you for liking what I write and subscribing my storys ^^  

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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onhosmayl
#1
Re-read againn for the 36281939163027times ❤
KeyShawol
#2
Chapter 17: I have to go read Minho's now lol
chansai_unmyong
#3
Chapter 5: my first time stumbling on your fic and i like where it is going~ i hope i can finish this in one sitting... my onho is so cute~
ayumi13
#4
Chapter 17: AHHHH NOOOO WHY END LIKE THAT!!! Arrgh but anyway this was soo cute!! Jinki sooo cute and jonghun was adorable And I love leeteuk!!! But wow sooo much Luna is too much and Vic do cute! Aiish u ate giving me heart attack okay we'll this was awesone!
PetitFreak0525 #5
Chapter 17: are u serious? it's so frustrating ! bad end bad end >.<.. ahah I'm joking..but it's still so frustrating >.< ...I'm gonna read Minho's vers. and I want !! And please...kill Luna for me x'D.
meandmyself #6
Chapter 17: It's end??
Waiting patiently for minho's vers, you will make me suffer >O<
SnHiromi #7
Chapter 17: oh gosh! Minho confessed first? :O
I can't wait to read Minho's ver. *-*
HikariLee
#8
Chapter 17: wow what an ending for this history xD you leave me with the feelings all over the place hahaha I hope after they get together minho will slap the next girl who tries to kiss him alright? lol he needs to stop that