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TEARS FROM THE PAST

"oh.. GD ssi.. Gudmorning." Hee Young stood up from her seat and bowed enthusiastically to GD.

 

"what's with the formality? U can just call me GD oppa.. Or you can call me Jiyong oppa if u want." he smiled at her and took a sit beside her chair.

 

"aigoo.. I'm a trainee GDssi.. You are my mentor amd sunbae.. I think it's rude on my side if i'll call u like that." She smiled and continued what she was doing.

 

Ji yong looked at her and suddenly smiled. He remembered how cute her Hee Young before.

 

"is it hard to call me oppa?"

 

Hee Young stopped on writing again and looked at GD.

 

"Sorry to ask this but.." she paused.

 

"is it because your ex girlfriend whom to be look a like me used to call you oppa?" she asked making the guy sigh.

 

After that question, silence suddenly enveloped the room.

 

"i shouldn't have asked."

 

"alright!" she smiled and sighed.

 

"Jiyong oppa and I will start our first day happily!"

 

GD then looked amazed at the girl beside her.

 

"what??? I already called you oppa.. Is it still not right?" Hee Young's smile and cheerful vibe suddenly faded.

 

"ani.. It's really nice to hear that again.."GD smiled and patted Hee Young's head.

 

"now kiddo, let's start the training.. First the vocal.. Bom noona will be here already in a few minutes so why don't you go to the other side if the room and condition now your voice."

 

Hee Young smiled and fixed her hair.

 

"arasseo oppa!" she stood up and started to vocalized.

 

GD just looked at her and studied her features.. Her Hee Young before and now is still the same.. She is really alive in his eyes.

 

Minutes later, Bim already arrived and soon they started the training.

 

After the vocalization, Hee Young's next training will be dancing. She will be trained by the kwon twins. GD decided to just let them be alone because he's still busy with Young Bae's fan meeting which is supposed to be already finished. Well, he went back on March that's why it's still not held.

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ihearthee #1
Chapter 1: Why can't I copy it?!?!?! Omygod!!!!!!!!
SWAGGERCRAYON #2
ayo guys.. just want to inform you that this story is GD POV.. :) Since i was always doing OC + LEADING MAN + OTHER CHARACTERS POV, i think it will be better if i'll do one POV.. :) I'll just do other POV if the ending is near. ^^ thank you
ihearthee #3
And one more thing about your foreword, I think I know what music video is that... but for your secrecy's sake, I won't tell as well. hahhahahah :)
ihearthee #4
Though, I don't get much the story I have to say this. Please be realistic in doing this fanfic, because for me, as a reader I'd rather read a realistic one than with something like illusions or fantasy... hahaha but no offense meant, hahaha I love the idea of putting GD as the main character. I'm very satisfied with the way you narrate... But can you please make the girl as the narrator and not GD cause i think it would be better if GD's emotions and feeling would be something like a 'cliffhanger' to the readers... some readers are more curious with what GD feels than the OC. Some readers or most of them are girls so it's better for the OC to speak everything out. :))

But after understanding well your story, I suppose that GD should be the one telling the whole stuffs. hahaha nice story!!!! Keep up the good work... And please look forward to my GD FF as well :))) I'll be posting it soon! :))) UPDATE MORE for your readers.. Saranghae Author-nim... :))))))))))) WELCOME TO THE APPLE WORLD of APPLERS! :) sseum-dwa!
ihearthee #5
Though, I don't get much the story I have to say this. Please be realistic in doing this fanfic, because for me, as a reader I'd rather read a realistic one than with something like illusions or fantasy... hahaha but no offense meant, hahaha I love the idea of putting GD as the main character. I'm very satisfied with the way you narrate... But can you please make the girl as the narrator and not GD cause i think it would be better if GD's emotions and feeling would be something like a 'cliffhanger' to the readers... some readers are more curious with what GD feels than the OC. Some readers or most of them are girls so it's better for the OC to speak everything out. :))

But after understanding well your story, I suppose that GD should be the one telling the whole stuffs. hahaha nice story!!!! Keep up the good work... And please look forward to my GD FF as well :))) I'll be posting it soon! :))) UPDATE MORE for your readers.. Saranghae Author-nim... :))))))))))) WELCOME TO THE APPLE WORLD of APPLERS! :) sseum-dwa!
shineexsmxfamily #6
Chapter 8: Okay so what is happening unnie?
shineexsmxfamily #7
Chapter 7: Okay..What is happening? A girl who looks and sounds like Hee Young? It's either she didn't die and had an amnesia or it's another girl who was sent to him so he can move on. Either way it's getting more interesting unnie :)
shineexsmxfamily #8
Chapter 6: So that's why the foreword was like that? OMG...unnie I cried again..Aigoo...You are the best unnie!! Ikaw na!! :)
shineexsmxfamily #9
Chapter 5: This is too sweet!! Oh my gosh..grabee...di ko matake!! unnie!!
shineexsmxfamily #10
Chapter 4: This is so sweet~ I'm actually surprised GD didn't get jealous since in most fanfics the lead guy will get jealous if the lead girl will be working with the other guy. As much as I like guys who will get jealous, I still like this kind of guy. :) In other words I like all types of guys xD haha
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