Bad Impression

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Sungmin woke up in the car, followed by a loud "WOAH~".

His new home in a big bungalow with a big garden for him to play football with, decorated with a small, decent gazebo, was way bigger the his old little Korean house.

 

"CHO KYUHYUN!" Mrs Cho shouted at the camera at the gate. A tall, young man opened the door immediately, welcoming his mother and his "new" sibling. "Umma, is this Sungmin?"

"Obviously, " Mrs Cho replied. She then pushed Sungmin to Kyuhyun. "Show him around. I'd leave for work already." After finishing the sentence, mrs Cho got in her car and scooted off.

 

"Work?" Kyuhyun scoffed. He never trusted his mother since after she was caught with a Mr Lee in the hotel/ Lee Sungmin? You mean their son or what?!

That conclusion made Kyuhyun hate his brother already. He looked at the petite guy's pink luggage, pointed at it and asked.

 

"Yours?"

 

"U-huh..." Sungmin answered softly. He then looked down on his toes. Although he's never ashamed of his favourite colour, but he finds himself feeling guilty.

"Such a colour for a boy." Kyuhyun commented. He seems to hate this colour, Sungmin thought. He wanted to explain about his hobby. "Well, I like it b-"

 

"Just come with me if you want to see your room. No-one is interested of what YOU are interested of." Kyuhyun broke in rudely. Why is this stupid dongsaeng being so talkative?

 

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"This is our room." Kyuhyun opened his room door and showed his neat, decent room to his brother. Sungmin wowed at his new room, concluded in one word, BIG!

 

Sungmin looked around and found a decent, blue picture frame. Curiously, he went to the desk and brought it to his eyes. He dropped it on the floor and it broke when Kyuhyun shouted, "YAH! What do you think you are doing?"

 

Kyuhyun ran to the shattered glass pieces. He got even angrier. "Do you know how much this is worth/ It costed my childhood!"

 

"Mianhae, hyung..."

 

"AISH!" Kyuhyun got fed up of irritating brother. Sungmin, the son between his mom and a random ert, shared his room, irritates his eyes with the clashing pink, and now he broke his favourite, and yet the most memorable picture frame if his!

 

"I warn you, don't you ever, ever, ever touch my stuff from now on. In this room, you only get the share of my bed and the wardrobe. NOTHING ELSE!"

 

"...Ara...sseo..." Sungmin looked down again. This time, it's another case of guiltiness.

 

"Okay," Kyuhyun closed his eyes and took a deep breath, trying his best to calm down. "Now, go do your stuff, clean up this mess and go bathe if you want to. In ten minutes, if you aren't coming down, you'll prepare your lunch yourself." Kyuhyun left the room and ended the conversation between the two of them with a loud door slam.

 

Silence in the room.

 

And it continues.

 

I... just gave my brother a really bad impression. Sungmin whispered to himself.


HELLO!

As I promised, update in a week as a thank you gift for subscribers~

But this time I might not really be able to keep it...

Chinese New Year is in a few more hours (no, not tomorrow, but on SUNDAY!!!!!), so I will be visiting my relatives, or my relatives will be visiting instead.

If I visit, there will be NO wifi. If THEY are visiting, I'll be in trouble if I stay infront of the laptop.

Get that? Good.

 

Last but not least, Happy Chinese New Year and let us welcome our new fanfamily (what???) member! *clap clap clap*

Adreana164

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Forest_pixi
#1
Chapter 8: okay...based on you a/n I gathered you gave up on this fic.

It was a confusing fic. The plot sequence was jumbled and the conversations between the characters was awkward. There isn't a lot I can say that would save this fic. Maybe a rewrite with a re-worked plot. Maybe some planning so that the sequencing is coherent.

maybe getting a beta to help correct and improve your English. I know from experience that receiving corrections for mistakes help you improve

anyway...on to the next and happy writing ^^
Forest_pixi
#2
Chapter 5: ok...got to chapter five and became confused....e_e

how old is kyu? isn't he 2 years younger than Min? If so, why is Min calling him Hyung? (if not, then ignore this..kkkk)

what 'brainwashing thing'? did you mean 'kidnapped' or 'abducted'?

...and I thought when he read the note on the bunny's foot he figured out who Min is...

anyway...reading on
Forest_pixi
#3
Chapter 1: I couldn't really follow the sequence of this chapter. some words made it ambiguous like 'unknown family'

so far I've got...kidnapped at age 4

...and a 2 year old had a crush on him?

ok...on to the next chappie
rizzorin #4
Chapter 8: love it!~ ^^
MissMaknae_F #5
Chapter 8: Awww.. KYU!!
yeoldigger
#6
Chapter 8: Kyuhyun! yeah that's right be there for uri Minnie
Aaleeyyah
#7
Chapter 4: Just one word for this chapter 'sweeeet'
Aaleeyyah
#8
Chapter 3: The boy from before....I knew it!! Great job author! I'm enjoying your story!!
Aaleeyyah
#9
Chapter 2: Poor Sungmin... the mother sure is... something... :)
Aaleeyyah
#10
Chapter 1: The beginning kinda cool...gonna keep reading... :):)