Broken Chords

Description

Broken chord.

Defined musically as notes of a chord played individually to differentiate the notes, or out of sequence or more than one note but less than the full chord simultaneously.

 

Alternatively,

In realism, explained as a perfect harmony that is ruined or broken into shattered pieces, yet to be picked up and fixed by someone.

 

"I trust in fate,

             And fate says to forget about her."

-Kim Jonghyun

 

"My only wish,

             Is to find the person who gave me this music box."

-Seo Byul

 

"If you think he's bothering you,

             Stop regretting and just leave us alone."

-Im Jin-ah

 

"Everyone knows how strong my cousin looks,

             But no-one knows how much tears  has he held back."

-Kim Kibum

 

Foreword

YAY NEW STORY!

 

LAWL.

 

This is a challenge I have set for myself: to finish all 12 (or maybe more) chapters in one year - of course, 2014.

 

Which means I will mainly focus on this story next year. Of course, I will try my best to update D&W and Memories (ESPECIALLY. Have been procastinating for a long time! XD) too.

 

RANTING TIME~~~

I don't know why, but suddenly I felt like writing some OC featuring Jonghyun.

 

After listening to... like, a WHOLE BUNCH of songs, I just decided to write something about music. 

 

Yeah.

 

I want to dedicate this to my piano teacher, whom I'm going to miss after I finish my grade 8 exams (hopefully next year).

So... hopefully you guys like... you know. 

 

*Arrow button! Arrow button!*

 

Hope you guys will love my first Challenge Project - Broken Chords! :)

 

 

Back to Top ↑

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
OurLoveGoesOn #1
Chapter 8: Omg. Omg. Omg. I'm just speechless. Poor Jjongie :'(

Update soon~<3

I'm so anticipated for Leeteuk's return. I've missed his dimpled face. :')
Good luck with your debate though~ *crosses fingers*
OurLoveGoesOn #2
Chapter 7: ...Don't tell me he's blind....
I can't think of any other reason why his hospital room would be dark...Omg...
Update soon <3
joanwee_001208 #3
Chapter 3: Hey Blender.
It's a mirale you found your (long-lost) pendrive.
XD
But anyways, looking forward to your other chapters. ^_^
Annyeong for now, author-nim!
Forest_pixi #4
Chapter 1: Do you study music? That was some pretty technical stuff...bravo

I'm already scrunching up my nose because of the "you" tag BUT i'm curious enough to see what you do with this original character.

/yes...my prejudice against the "you" tag is showing...OTL...sorry

...so I'm gonna read this as an OC story ^_^

some things to take note of:
1. Instead of saying "Not in 10 seconds.." try something like "Not ten seconds later" or "Seconds later"
2. Instead of "a blank seat" use "an empty seat"
3. When you described the teacher entering the room you used only the word "slid" which by itself makes the sentence incorrect. You need to add the verb 'to open'. It could read "...another person slid the door slid open..." or "another person opened the door..."

happy writing ^^
xoImACrazyxo #5
Chapter 1: Wow sooo cool ^-^ I love it so far. Such an intresting plot. Please update~!!!! ^-^ ♥
Back to Top ↑