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Sungmin, the chubbiest guy, was kidnapped and brainwashed. Before he know it, he lost memory and called a woman "umma".

 

But...

 

Did he realise that...

 

That woman's son--his hyung, recgonises him...

Isn't Sungmin... Chu?

Foreword

That's weird.

What the hell happened to C&P and THE MOST IMPORTANT, LCE???????

Better not be my cousin's "January Fool" prank on me. -.-

Anyways.....

 

Sungmin being the innocent brainwashed guy, and Kyuhyun being the mature man. 

I mean, nevermind...

I am well-known as the gal-who-talks-nonsense-stuff-that-is-non-sense.

Get it? No. 

See the point?

 

Anyways.....

 

Being hiatus, and even if I am online, I'm on MOBILE. So probably would take forever to get this fanfic done. AS LONG AS THERE WON'T BE FEBRUARY FOOL, MARCH FOOL...

 

Sorry for LCE subbers. Hope this would fulfill your..... umm...

 

Forgive my English failure. 

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Forest_pixi #1
Chapter 8: okay...based on you a/n I gathered you gave up on this fic.

It was a confusing fic. The plot sequence was jumbled and the conversations between the characters was awkward. There isn't a lot I can say that would save this fic. Maybe a rewrite with a re-worked plot. Maybe some planning so that the sequencing is coherent.

maybe getting a beta to help correct and improve your English. I know from experience that receiving corrections for mistakes help you improve

anyway...on to the next and happy writing ^^
Forest_pixi #2
Chapter 5: ok...got to chapter five and became confused....e_e

how old is kyu? isn't he 2 years younger than Min? If so, why is Min calling him Hyung? (if not, then ignore this..kkkk)

what 'brainwashing thing'? did you mean 'kidnapped' or 'abducted'?

...and I thought when he read the note on the bunny's foot he figured out who Min is...

anyway...reading on
Forest_pixi #3
Chapter 1: I couldn't really follow the sequence of this chapter. some words made it ambiguous like 'unknown family'

so far I've got...kidnapped at age 4

...and a 2 year old had a crush on him?

ok...on to the next chappie
rizzorin #4
Chapter 8: love it!~ ^^
MissMaknae_F #5
Chapter 8: Awww.. KYU!!
yeoldigger #6
Chapter 8: Kyuhyun! yeah that's right be there for uri Minnie
Aaleeyyah #7
Chapter 4: Just one word for this chapter 'sweeeet'
Aaleeyyah #8
Chapter 3: The boy from before....I knew it!! Great job author! I'm enjoying your story!!
Aaleeyyah #9
Chapter 2: Poor Sungmin... the mother sure is... something... :)
Aaleeyyah #10
Chapter 1: The beginning kinda cool...gonna keep reading... :):)
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