Blue Tears of the Sea [one-shot]

Description

Modern-life Little Mermaid.
Who would want such a story?

Kyungsoo was the one who saved him and sat by
his bed every single day after that accident that
washed Kai's memories away.

But sadly, Kai didn't know.

Misunderstanding led to a
sad love story ending.

Or...

Did the Prince
really lose Little Mermaid,
once and for all?

The answers, all in Pureun Bada's diary.

Foreword

This is a bonus oneshot for all :)

And of course for the REAL OBJECTIVE of this story,

Me and my juniors/mates organised a oneshot competition (NO, YOU CAN'T JOIN THE FUN! =P) and this year's theme is: SONGFICS.

Since... I'm the BIGGEST JUDGE in the list and I'm the main organiser, and this is the FIRST ANNUAL COMPETITION, So of course I have to... yeah.

BTW... YAY!!!!

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multi-ulti-23 #1 Jun 12, 2014 01:38:55

I really like the style of narration used. I know it's somewhat first person POV, but I'm a little slow as of late so lemme just ask a quick question...

Basically, it's not really Kyung Soo's POV but it's the OC's POV reading the story which is in Kyung Soo's POV? I don't know if my question seemed confusing or it was so literal that there's no point in asking... I might be making a fool of myself here.

Anyway! This is a really nice modern take of the fairy-tale, The Little Mermaid. I did my own take on the song once and to say it was modern... well, I think it's safe to say it was pitiful. I made it into a drabbleseries because I had initially thought of the story in a music video-ish setting. So, the only way to express the scenes were to either be really descriptive or really simple. I went with completely basic.

A job well done! I like the setting for this story. The best version by far. I wish there was more I could say. Again, good job!! b^^d

Forest_pixi #2 Jan 4, 2014 20:18:03

Chapter 2: I liked the setup of someone buying a book to read the story. ^^

I liked the plot...it was good and to the point. Kyungsoo's perspective was represented correctly and fit the character you built for him in this oneshot.

The ending, coming from Kai's perspective was good also but I got confused as to the timing. Was it immediately after he read the letter that he ran to the airport or was it after reading the published book that he tried to track down Kyungsoo?

But good job...^^