I HAVE A COUSIN?! 

It's complicated!

 Mimi: Omma

Mom: aigooo what do you want now?
Mimi: i have a cousin?
Dad: you've told her?!
Mom: It went out :( she thought we stole the ticket...
Mimi: HELLO? who is this cousin? Can someone tell me?
Dad: Mimi ah you have a cousin... And she's th--
Mimi: the kpop group's manager i know... I wanna know.. Is she korean?
Mom: OFCOURSE YOU SILLY GIRL WHAT DO YOU THINK SHE IS? AN AFRICAN?
Mimi: hah? Omma you're have half african too?! Aigooo u both never tell me anything...
Mom: AIGOO why is it so hard talking to you? Aigoooooo
Mimi: why is she giving the concert ticket btw? These are backstage passes    -,- Did she ask for anything? 
Dad: no she didnt... Pffttt 
Mom: umm kinda
Dad: JINJA?! Aigoooo you lil!! Why do you have to tell her everything?
Mom: i just wanna let her know because she is the one who is going to greet them... 
Mimi: WHATTTT?!
 
Sorry another short chapter...
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DYBismine
Honestly it's not completed yet.. I'm kinda new to this stuffs so im not sure how too :)
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DYBismine #1
Park_HyeSun thanks for the advice. I'm kinda new to this thing so can you tell me how can i make it uncomplete like on going?
Park_HyeSun #2
Well, well...

First things first. I usually only read completed stories, regardless of charcters used as long as it is not M-rated or /yuri. As this story of yours is marked as completed, I have read it. But to my surprise, it doesn't seem to have ended properly! :o

If you're looking for some constructive advice for your writing, I'm only going to point out two. (: I'd suggest that you refrain from using your smiley emoticons in the story as it appears to be both distracting and unprofessional. Secondly, usually people don't write in dialogue form. ^^

Keep on writing! If I have offended you in any way, I am truly sorry.
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