I think i have a crush

It's complicated!

 

"SELAMAT DATANG BIG BANG" all the staffs at the hotel greeted them in malay.
Everyone was suprised... Me too XD it's all planned by my mom and dad... (those two always makes surprises without me knowing) I got them to their rooms and said my farewell... After that i went back to my room with Dara on my side still speechless......
 
{In Mimi's Room}
 
Mimi: i can't believe you let me chat with them alone in th van -,-
Dara: i can't believe you just talked with the FAMOUS BIG BANG!! 
Mimi: they're human beings too -,-
Dara: yeah but better than us! They may look like human beings but they sing like ANGELS! Especially Daesung and YB!!
Mimi: oh really? YB sings? 
Dara: duhhhhhh 
Mimi: he seams quiet but he is sooo cute :)
Dara: uuuuuuuuu mimi has a crush on yb!!! 
Mimi: no i dont -,-
 
{ In Big Bang's suite} 
 
GD: hey CL when are we gonna meet that cute cousin of yours again?
CL: at dinner maybe.. Why? You like her? Too bad she's too young for you XP btw she's the hotel president's daughter.. So better dont toy with her or you'll get kicked out..
GD: YAHH! i'm just kidding 
TOP: yeah right :3 i still can't believe she smiled at YB and daesung only -,- i'm so jealous of both of you.. She's a cute girl..
Daesung: no she wasnt but she totally smiled at hyung ;)
*Everyone looks at YB*
YB: what?
Seungri: Yah hyung i think she might like you...
YB: *blushed* you think?
Everyone (except yb): *Turns Around* *makes vomiting face* yeah totally
YB: YAHHH!! Aishh i'm going for a swim
GD: wait for me!
YB: anyone else?
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DYBismine
Honestly it's not completed yet.. I'm kinda new to this stuffs so im not sure how too :)
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DYBismine #1
Park_HyeSun thanks for the advice. I'm kinda new to this thing so can you tell me how can i make it uncomplete like on going?
Park_HyeSun #2
Well, well...

First things first. I usually only read completed stories, regardless of charcters used as long as it is not M-rated or /yuri. As this story of yours is marked as completed, I have read it. But to my surprise, it doesn't seem to have ended properly! :o

If you're looking for some constructive advice for your writing, I'm only going to point out two. (: I'd suggest that you refrain from using your smiley emoticons in the story as it appears to be both distracting and unprofessional. Secondly, usually people don't write in dialogue form. ^^

Keep on writing! If I have offended you in any way, I am truly sorry.
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