Accident at the swimming pool

It's complicated!

 

Somehow i cant forget about him and what dara said... So I went to the swimming pool to think about it... Do i really like him? Or dont? So i changed my clothes and went for a swim....
 
When i was busy swimming suddenly i saw him and gd coming. my jaws opened wide! Why must he ruin my thinking time?! Plus i was just about to think about him! -- uuuu thoose abbs lf his is to die for!! -- snap out of it mimi! He doesnt like you he has so many girls in line for him! Grrr.... Ommo i think GD saw me!! Swim away mimi !! swim!!
 
GD: hey you!! 
YB: what is it?   
GD: it's just the chick from the airport...
YB: where?
GD: she swam away... I think i scared her... Plus why do you even care? So you do like her ehh??
YB: you scared everyone -,-  why can't i care for someone? As a friend ?ofcourse! She's super nice to me..
 
Mimi: WHATTA?! Why is he calling me? Wait mimi! He said you not mimi! So maybe he's calling someone else? Yes definately! Why do i think he's calling me?! YAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! Why did i shouted?! WTF?! What's wrong with me?
GD: hey pretty :) can we swim with you? 
Mimi: you're here ayt? It's not like if i could chased you out of the swimming pool? (sarcasticly)
YB: so is that a no or yes?
Mimi: oh ummm........ I dunno.. Yes ?
YB: btw whats ur name? 
Mimi: huh?
YB: we introduced ourselves just now but you didnt...
Mimi: oh yeah... The names Han Min Mi... But you can call me Mimi..
GD: cute..
Mimi: umm thanks?
YB: nice to meet you mimi.. Sorry if he bothers you.. He only acts like this whenever there's a cute/pretty girl...
Mimi: sooo im a cute/pretty girl?
GD: *acting masculine* sort of..
YB: yup! Umm oh sorryy *blushed*
Mimi: *giggles* thanks umm.. Um? *points at gd*
YB: ummm kindaa
Mimi: lol okayy..
YB: soo would--
Mimi:  Um sorry i need to go.. My mom's calling me nice talk btw.... *leaves
YB: umm bye?
 
 
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Honestly it's not completed yet.. I'm kinda new to this stuffs so im not sure how too :)

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DYBismine #1
Park_HyeSun thanks for the advice. I'm kinda new to this thing so can you tell me how can i make it uncomplete like on going?
Park_HyeSun #2
Well, well...

First things first. I usually only read completed stories, regardless of charcters used as long as it is not M-rated or /yuri. As this story of yours is marked as completed, I have read it. But to my surprise, it doesn't seem to have ended properly! :o

If you're looking for some constructive advice for your writing, I'm only going to point out two. (: I'd suggest that you refrain from using your smiley emoticons in the story as it appears to be both distracting and unprofessional. Secondly, usually people don't write in dialogue form. ^^

Keep on writing! If I have offended you in any way, I am truly sorry.