COUSINNNNNNNNN!!!!!!

It's complicated!

 

Mom woke me up and ask me to get ready to get CL and the kpop group. I woke up and went for a shower. I wore my regular T-Shirts and jeans and made ponytail hairstyle and grab my wallet. as i walk at the lobby i saw Dara and we both went Straight to the hotel van and head to the airport...  
 
I waited for almost half an hour and i heard an annoucement saying The flight from Seoul ,Korea to Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia just arrived.. I went straight to the arrival and saw so many people there
 
Dara: Aigoooo i almost forgot!! Today is the day that Big Bang arrives at Malaysia good thing we're at the airport! Let's go to the front! 
Mimi: oh okay...  
 
I was holding a sign with CL's name since i didnt knew her face so i made a sign so that she notice me.. We waited for another hour there.. I was getting kinda tired.... Then i got a call from my mom
 
Mom: WHERE IN THE WORLD ARE YOU?! Your cousin has been waiting for an hour!
Mimi: whatta? I've been waiting for her! Tell me where is she! I'm at the arrival
Mom: AIGOO SILLY GIRL! 
Mimi: what now?
Mom: ofcourse they used the VIP exit! 
Mimi: why is that?
Mom: aigoooo you want them to be attacked by the fans?
Mimi: oh arassoo omma!
 
I hanged up and ran straight to the VIP exit and hold up the sign than I hear someone shouting my name... 
 
****:  Han Min Mi??
Mimi: how do you know my name?
Dara: *leans closer to me* isnt that big bang? O.O *her eyes widen*
mimi: who's big bang?
Dara: a kpop group! 
Mimi: CL? O.O
CL: oh i tought you'll never notice! Heyyy so where's the van?
Mimi: there !
CL: arasso! Hey guys! There!
Dara: *speechless*
 
 (In the van otw to the hotel)
 
I was busy playing with my phone suddenly i saw the whole group looking at me..
 
Mimi: *leans closer to dara* *whispers* why are they looking at me?
Dara: i dunno... Um mimi am i dead? Am i in heaven? THANK YOU GOD *continues to look at them*
mimi: *leans closer to CL* hey um may i know why are they looking at me like imma criminal?
CL: *giggles* hey dudes! Cut it out! You guys are scaring her -,-
Daesung: um sorry *smiles
Mimi: never mind :)
GD: hey CL arent you going to introduce us to her? She seems like she doesnt know big bang...
Mimi: yeah i dont.... 
CL: okay than .....
 
 

 

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Honestly it's not completed yet.. I'm kinda new to this stuffs so im not sure how too :)

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DYBismine #1
Park_HyeSun thanks for the advice. I'm kinda new to this thing so can you tell me how can i make it uncomplete like on going?
Park_HyeSun #2
Well, well...

First things first. I usually only read completed stories, regardless of charcters used as long as it is not M-rated or /yuri. As this story of yours is marked as completed, I have read it. But to my surprise, it doesn't seem to have ended properly! :o

If you're looking for some constructive advice for your writing, I'm only going to point out two. (: I'd suggest that you refrain from using your smiley emoticons in the story as it appears to be both distracting and unprofessional. Secondly, usually people don't write in dialogue form. ^^

Keep on writing! If I have offended you in any way, I am truly sorry.