Concert rehersal

It's complicated!

 

Today's the day that big bang's gonna perform.. & i'm going because i wouldnt want to waste those backstage passes..i brought dara with me too... She thank me (ALOT) and before that she even fainted -,- silly girl
 
{At the rehersal}
 
dara: AWWWWW  MIMI AH I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! THANK YOU THANK YOU!
Mimi: relax it's just backstage passes to big bang
Dara: JUST?! This is a one in a million oppurtunity! And you got it! You so lucky ahh!!
Mimi: arasso i know this is SOO important to u *rolls eyes
 
GD: heyy Mims!
Dara: ommo BIG BANG'S COMING! 
Mimi: (why isnt YB there? Why is there only 4?) *leans closer to dara* Dara! Where's YB?
Dara: dunno.... O.O
TOP: hey mimi :)  
Mimi: hey..
Seungri: annyeongg
Mimi: wheres--
TOP: YB? His on stage ready for his solo performance...
Mimi: ouhh ( did he just read my mind ) so what is he gonna sing?
TOP: look at only me and wedding dress
 
I saw the performance and it's AWESOME!! I went to the front to see a better view then i notice that he's was totally making eye contact with me... 
 
Then he went down and went straight to me.. It was Daesung's time to perform.. He stood beside me..
 
YB: so whaddu you think?
Mimi: about? 
YB: the performance?
Mimi: it's okay... (no it's not it was AWESOME!)
YB: oh it's okay? Then you think i should improve more?
Mimi: nahh it's okay.. Like in a good way.. No offense
YB: none taken.. 
Mimi: dara's right.. you and daesung's voice are like angel's voice... I especially love it when you sang the look at only me chorus like *sing in korean*
YB: (woahhh her voice is beautiful) wow.. Your voice... It's awesome..
Mimi: oh thanks.. I usually don't sing in front of guys...
YB: so i'm the first guy to hear it?
Mimi: kinda.. Haha..
YB: it's awesome.. You should show talent... Or go for an audition at YG?! Yeah! You would be famous if you go for the audition.. I'm in the same company..
Mimi: nahh i don't think so... My parents wouldnt agree.. They wanted me to study hard..
YB: no prob you can still go for classes and still be a trainee.. 
Mimi: we'll see... :)
 
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Honestly it's not completed yet.. I'm kinda new to this stuffs so im not sure how too :)
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DYBismine #1
Park_HyeSun thanks for the advice. I'm kinda new to this thing so can you tell me how can i make it uncomplete like on going?
Park_HyeSun #2
Well, well...

First things first. I usually only read completed stories, regardless of charcters used as long as it is not M-rated or /yuri. As this story of yours is marked as completed, I have read it. But to my surprise, it doesn't seem to have ended properly! :o

If you're looking for some constructive advice for your writing, I'm only going to point out two. (: I'd suggest that you refrain from using your smiley emoticons in the story as it appears to be both distracting and unprofessional. Secondly, usually people don't write in dialogue form. ^^

Keep on writing! If I have offended you in any way, I am truly sorry.
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