It's complicated!

Description

So hey there guys this is my first time writing a fanfic... I hope you guys enjoy my Big Bang/YG/SM/JYP fanfic... I mixed plenty of idols from each company. I would like to say sorry if any of my words in this fanfic may hurts some of your feelings... You may comment any of your suggestions about the fanfic.. ^_^ i also hope you enjoy this fanfic.

Foreword

It's complicated!

Here are some facts about the characters

Dong Yong Bae

- One of the boys from a Famous Korean Pop Group calld Big Bang

- Famous nickname TaeYang/YB

- Very quiet and mysterious

- Has an amaaazzzinggg voice XD *Fangirling for awhile*

- Has a crush on Mimi (Han Min Mi)

Han Min Mi

- Mimi for short

- Loves Big Bang

- Half Malaysian Half Korean

- Loves to read Big Bang Fanfics

- Crazy, outgoing, funny, VERY LOUD

Ryu Si Won (Tiffany)

- Fany for short

- Has a HUGE crush on YB

- Always hang around with Big Bang

- Hates every girl who comes near to YB

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DYBismine #1 Dec 29, 2012 22:36:37

Park_HyeSun thanks for the advice. I'm kinda new to this thing so can you tell me how can i make it uncomplete like on going?

Park_HyeSun #2 Dec 29, 2012 06:47:38

Well, well...

First things first. I usually only read completed stories, regardless of charcters used as long as it is not M-rated or /yuri. As this story of yours is marked as completed, I have read it. But to my surprise, it doesn't seem to have ended properly! :o

If you're looking for some constructive advice for your writing, I'm only going to point out two. (: I'd suggest that you refrain from using your smiley emoticons in the story as it appears to be both distracting and unprofessional. Secondly, usually people don't write in dialogue form. ^^

Keep on writing! If I have offended you in any way, I am truly sorry.