Good news

It's complicated!

This is a short chapter... But i hope you guys like it......

 

Hey the names Han Min Mi :) Mimi for short~~ i live in Malaysia... My dad owns a hotel here. so me, mom and dad live in one of the suites there.. I lived here since i was 4 years old Plus i'm half Korean half Malaysian ^_^ i guess that's why i love everything related to korean stuff like their food, cultures and drama :) i always wanted to go to Korea but my mom and dad is always busy with their work :( i don't usually argue with them because i knew they work hard for me.

 
Mom: Mimi!! COME DOWN NOW!
Mimi: what omma?? 
Dad: GOOD NEWS!  
Mimi: what is it? 
Mom: i know you love Korea so MUCH!
Mimi: YES! YES I DO! 
Dad: And because you passed your exam with flying colours! 
Mom: CLOSE YOUR EYES!
Mimi: *close eyes* (i think they're going to give me First Class tickets to KOREA!)
Dad: Here! 
Mimi: (YES I THINK IT'S PAPER OMMO IT'S DEFINATELY PAPER!) *without looking at the ticket* Oh Appa!Omma! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH! thank you i've been waiting for this day!!  can't wait to go there! Kamsahminda! Kamsahminda! Kamsahminda! 
Mom: I never thought you EVER want to go to a concert before i'm sorry for holding you back then... I'm glad you like it :)
Mimi: HUH a concert? *Looks at the ticket* Whatta? Why do i want to go to a concert? 
Mom: i dunno -,- you said you've been waiting for this day....
Mimi: OMMA!!! T.T i thought it's a ticket to Korea :( I REALLY REALLY WANNA GO THERE
Dad: i'm sorry baby girl it's just that we don't have enough money and time to bring you there....
Mimi: and instead you bought me a KPOP concert tickets -,- woahhh nice
Mom: hey we didnt bought it you silly girl! *Slaps Mimi's Head* aigooo why would we buy it?!
Mimi: then how did yo-- OMMA DONT TELL ME YOU -- *gasp* 
Mom: *Slaps Mimi's head again* AIGOOOO WHAT IS GOING IN UR HEAD HUH?! I got it from your cousin which is one of the group's manager -,- *leaves*
Mimi: ohh hehe... WHAT COUSIN? WAIT OMMA!! U betta tell me! OMMA!!!
 

 

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Honestly it's not completed yet.. I'm kinda new to this stuffs so im not sure how too :)

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DYBismine #1
Park_HyeSun thanks for the advice. I'm kinda new to this thing so can you tell me how can i make it uncomplete like on going?
Park_HyeSun #2
Well, well...

First things first. I usually only read completed stories, regardless of charcters used as long as it is not M-rated or /yuri. As this story of yours is marked as completed, I have read it. But to my surprise, it doesn't seem to have ended properly! :o

If you're looking for some constructive advice for your writing, I'm only going to point out two. (: I'd suggest that you refrain from using your smiley emoticons in the story as it appears to be both distracting and unprofessional. Secondly, usually people don't write in dialogue form. ^^

Keep on writing! If I have offended you in any way, I am truly sorry.