School day :(

It's complicated!

 

Today's monday so it's obviously SCHOOL DAY 
I'm so happy to meet my friends it's been a weird weekend because of my parents by the way this is the last week of school i can't believe the year's ending -,- 
 
Dara: MIMI AHHH!!!! Aigoo *breathes heavily
Mimi: aigoo why did you ran?? What's wrong with you? Any news? 
Dara: woahh one at a time please :B 
Mimi: okayy Did you enter the school marathon? because you're running so fast -,-
Dara: no i'm not! I'm just so happy that Big Bang's FINALLY coming to Malaysia! Sadly i cant go :( i have no tickets & money HUAAAAAAA 
Mimi: oh okay btw wanna know something?
Dara: what? *leans closer*
Mimi: I HAVE A COUSIN! 
Dara: woahhh... Wanna know something too?
Mimi: what?
Dara: I HAVE A BRAIN.. (sarcasticly) I HAVE A COUSIN TOO YOU DUMMY! 
Mimi: Grrrrrr sooo you have a korean cousin that is coming to Malaysia?
Dara: WHAT?! Ommo!! Is it a she or a he?
Mimi: SHE! 
Dara: *sigh* i was hoping to meet a korean dude since i didnt get to meet big bang.
Mimi: stop dreaming! Now are you free this saturday? 
Dara: maybe why?
Mimi: GOOD! YOU HAVE TO FOLLOW ME FETCH MY COUSIN :)
Dara: SURE!
G.O: HEYYA MIMI :) hey dara..
Mimi: HEY G.O :)
Dara: oh hey G.O
G.O: why so sad dara?
Dara: because you rise your voice when you said "Hi" to mimi and lows your voice when to said "Hi" to me -,-
G.O: ...... okay... Sorry?
Dara: apology accepted!
Mimi: you guys are so cute together because it's like Dumb and Dumber! HAHA
G.O&Dara: HEYY!!
 
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DYBismine
Honestly it's not completed yet.. I'm kinda new to this stuffs so im not sure how too :)
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DYBismine #1
Park_HyeSun thanks for the advice. I'm kinda new to this thing so can you tell me how can i make it uncomplete like on going?
Park_HyeSun #2
Well, well...

First things first. I usually only read completed stories, regardless of charcters used as long as it is not M-rated or /yuri. As this story of yours is marked as completed, I have read it. But to my surprise, it doesn't seem to have ended properly! :o

If you're looking for some constructive advice for your writing, I'm only going to point out two. (: I'd suggest that you refrain from using your smiley emoticons in the story as it appears to be both distracting and unprofessional. Secondly, usually people don't write in dialogue form. ^^

Keep on writing! If I have offended you in any way, I am truly sorry.
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