Authors Note

Baby don't cry

Someone was confused as to what happened to Lay. He cut himself during the time Meili had passed away. He cut the hand that was holding onto Meili's hand under tha blanket. The loss of blood would've taken longer but it just seemed to have fit with the moment in the story, it takes a while after you've cut yourself to die from the amount of blood; so Lay committed suicide in order to be with Meili. That's why he ended up dying.

The time was from around 1:30 -the time she passed a way- till about 5 or 6 in the evening that Lay had died. My idea was that Lay had cut himself around 2 from a piece of glass he had found around them. Meili's family came because Lay had called Yulan , her brother,  to tell them that she had passed away. So yeah. 

The ending was fast, but I had planned on this happening over at least 3-5 days after she had come home from the hospital. This one was short and less descriptive than I would've liked but I'm still growing as an author and I will try to make a "full length" fanfic. 

Thank you for supporting me throughout this story! 

 

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kissmeb2st
#1
Chapter 12: Aww... I cried.. Good job author! It's a really good story?
ZhangXingXing
#2
Seems interesting. New reader here :)
nhinhoetic #3
Chapter 2: Hey guy~
Can I translate your fic into Vietnames?
I will take out with full credit.
Sory, 'I can't speak English well. :)
nekochessy
#4
ONE OF THE BEST SHORT FIC. SRSLY. TT TT
LillacEmerald #5
I love this story so much, have already read it so many times :) <3
milky-ho
#6
Chapter 10: Awwee, you guys are too sweet! Thank you :3
yoeler
#7
Chapter 11: omg omg, i can't, i can't T-T, this story is making me cry soo much! its beautiful though. thank you.
woodwinked
#8
Chapter 11: /sobs/ this is so beautiful. how many times have i said that lay is like the perfect husband material... the ending though, did he cut himself to be with her in the after life?
mellychau #9
Chapter 11: Omg it is so beautiful I wanna just cry
Kosianfanfics
#10
Chapter 11: Dx I camt stop sobbing but im happy they're together! I just don't understand what happened with lay