The Death Sonnet (a.k.a The Finished Lovers Sonnet)

Pieces of a Shattered Heart
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The deepest ocean can’t drown my love for thee For it floats upon thy shore And the wind shook not the buds to flee It shall protect I; from pain and sore   Be warm by the crimson sun, and not burning Yet it burnt I; to my last air Thee my star; at I; thee twinkling No less will black be fair   My soul shall always follow thy serenade Even the sky will bow down to thy light  No Gods can make thee fade Neither can the myths take away my plight   For by thy side is where I live to be I will follow thee into eternity     --------------     created: March 10 2007 extracted from my co-written fanfic: Crimson Order this just shows how badly i ...i've edited a bit but it still ...cut me some slack ok, this was written in 2007. well...at least i tried...not just shakespeare write sonnet yknw...a hopelesswriter does too, though hers totally fail. lol. sorry that it doesn't make sense since it's written in the fanfic's context.    
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Hey guys, you probly don't want to know...but i've added the movie screencap for ch47 poem. xD...watch it if you're interested.

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flawlessey
#1
Chapter 91: i could relate to this poem so much;-;
bibiii_bb #2
Chapter 80: This is my favourite
bibiii_bb #3
Chapter 62: Hey there.. I still read your poem, from the start☺ I start it all over after I've read all of them. Searching for some inspiration and as an escape I might say
bibiii_bb #4
Chapter 68: Through times your poem has grew within me, because all of your poem pretty much the sum up of my life. ohh yaa, and been a reader from the start. Just idk what to respond :D
uniqdreamz #5
Chapter 74: Who said this wasted an hour of precious sleep ? :) Give me more than an hour and I still couldn't come up with this. I know that till this day I definitely wanna be a tourist for life if only it's possible....reality bites..
uniqdreamz #6
Chapter 29: This is simple but it summed up what I think is true :)
uniqdreamz #7
Chapter 71: A little confusion here...do you meant music is one's favorite friend ? I don't know if I'm right but music is definitely my favorite companion when I'm down....thanks. Lol.
uniqdreamz #8
Chapter 70: I do hope what you've written works for your friend... and thanks for sharing this meaningful thoughts of yours. :)
uniqdreamz #9
Chapter 69: A minute poem ? I couldn't even do a rondelet when I tried after reading Goodbye Tears. This is at least your good attempt ? Lol....
uniqdreamz #10
Chapter 30: I totally feel what you're trying to convey thru this poem. I couldn't agree more....just the road to recovery is a little harder.