That Lonely Star

Pieces of a Shattered Heart
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    Pick that lonely star for me Let it not be hurt by its own shining light For no one listens to its lonesome plight It burns alone by its own reflection through the night Oh, please pick that lonely star for me   Pluck that lovely star for me For no one would stare at it, and adore its beauty Luminous it glows, yet no eyes seem to see Let it not be in their presence of crude judgment, so unworthy Oh, please pick that lovely lonely star for me, wouldn't you?   Haul that teary star for me Its sorrowful mourn only heard as noise They couldn't heed its brilliant shining voice Were they waiting for its whimper to turn hoarse? Oh, I beseech you, please pick that teary, lovely, lonely star for me, why wouldn't you?   Before the morning light greets the new day Before the remaining flicker diminished into final ray Before its aching heart ablaze into worthless dim ashes Before its sorrow tears turn into numbness Before it explodes in all proud lonely luminous glory Please   Pick that lonely star for me For my small hands, unable to reach its glitter Pick it, before it falls into pieces, shatter And shines no more for eternity.     ---------------------------------------   completed: July 3rd 2013, 12:07 a.m.       for some reason, i like this one, some obvious topic inspired me...but the song luminous star by anyeongbada(byebyesea) i listened while updating fanfic help to deepen the emotions. so here i
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Hey guys, you probly don't want to know...but i've added the movie screencap for ch47 poem. xD...watch it if you're interested.

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flawlessey
#1
Chapter 91: i could relate to this poem so much;-;
bibiii_bb #2
Chapter 80: This is my favourite
bibiii_bb #3
Chapter 62: Hey there.. I still read your poem, from the start☺ I start it all over after I've read all of them. Searching for some inspiration and as an escape I might say
bibiii_bb #4
Chapter 68: Through times your poem has grew within me, because all of your poem pretty much the sum up of my life. ohh yaa, and been a reader from the start. Just idk what to respond :D
uniqdreamz #5
Chapter 74: Who said this wasted an hour of precious sleep ? :) Give me more than an hour and I still couldn't come up with this. I know that till this day I definitely wanna be a tourist for life if only it's possible....reality bites..
uniqdreamz #6
Chapter 29: This is simple but it summed up what I think is true :)
uniqdreamz #7
Chapter 71: A little confusion here...do you meant music is one's favorite friend ? I don't know if I'm right but music is definitely my favorite companion when I'm down....thanks. Lol.
uniqdreamz #8
Chapter 70: I do hope what you've written works for your friend... and thanks for sharing this meaningful thoughts of yours. :)
uniqdreamz #9
Chapter 69: A minute poem ? I couldn't even do a rondelet when I tried after reading Goodbye Tears. This is at least your good attempt ? Lol....
uniqdreamz #10
Chapter 30: I totally feel what you're trying to convey thru this poem. I couldn't agree more....just the road to recovery is a little harder.