i thought of whether i should do a poem about the ferry/ship tragedy...but there are already so many depressing feel in poetry world even without tragedy...no?...n if i'm to do a poem dealing with deep feelings like death n loss, i need to really plunge into the feelings genuinely or i'd feel like a jerk to use unfortunate situation to get some lame spotlight with half-assed superficial portrayal....ahh idk....i'm just tired n need some dreamy energy....hmm...anyway, idk why lately...my poems keep sounding like cheesy b/c-grade love poems...but idk...does this really sound like someone in love? or not? lol. i'm really curious n i'd be thankful if anyone would answer this once for me. :p  i'm not even sure which kind of poems you guys like or if you even read...but yeah...whatever i guess...by the way...this one flowed effortlessly during first draft...but bcuz i'm trying to do Kyrielle Sonnet....the editing to fit in syllables n words that fit the real feelings to deliver caused so much editing until it became this. crappy~

 

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I think these feelings might be love,
The sight of you makes my head swirl,
This great tremor I could not shove,
For when there's you, I'm but a girl.

In my cosmos, you fill each void,
Your cute broad smile makes my toes curl,
This pain I would never avoid,
For when there's you, I'm but a girl.

After all, what's the worth of air?
Breathtaking voice, finer than pearl,<