Intangible Encounter

Pieces of a Shattered Heart
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(background song n vid if you will...xD)

 

 

Can you see me, I wonder,
Tears hidden by the thunder.
Could it be possible that you can hear,
It does not matter, if only you're here.
Silent prayers wafting through the gray sky,
If you would just take a whiff, I could cry.
Blessings of heaven pouring down the empty space,
A blistering bliss, can you taste?
Alas, you can only have so much,
As tangible as I seem, you can never touch.
There's no need to wish for more,
If you could just cherish this pour.
Can you see me now, I wonder,
Before our moment dissolves beneath this thunder.

 

 

3:38am, october 13 2016

 

 

i wasn't planning on this...i'm in a deep slump....but my shipping for those adorbness up there made me want to write a fic...however...this came on a whim...oh well...i pondered quite a bit about the title....thought i'd be titling it 'intangible touch' at first...haa....of course that doesn't make sense...but hey...it's poetry...rules is in the poets' court...haa...anyway, hope this one's not too bad....till then...

 

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Hey guys, you probly don't want to know...but i've added the movie screencap for ch47 poem. xD...watch it if you're interested.

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flawlessey
#1
Chapter 91: i could relate to this poem so much;-;
bibiii_bb #2
Chapter 80: This is my favourite
bibiii_bb #3
Chapter 62: Hey there.. I still read your poem, from the start☺ I start it all over after I've read all of them. Searching for some inspiration and as an escape I might say
bibiii_bb #4
Chapter 68: Through times your poem has grew within me, because all of your poem pretty much the sum up of my life. ohh yaa, and been a reader from the start. Just idk what to respond :D
uniqdreamz #5
Chapter 74: Who said this wasted an hour of precious sleep ? :) Give me more than an hour and I still couldn't come up with this. I know that till this day I definitely wanna be a tourist for life if only it's possible....reality bites..
uniqdreamz #6
Chapter 29: This is simple but it summed up what I think is true :)
uniqdreamz #7
Chapter 71: A little confusion here...do you meant music is one's favorite friend ? I don't know if I'm right but music is definitely my favorite companion when I'm down....thanks. Lol.
uniqdreamz #8
Chapter 70: I do hope what you've written works for your friend... and thanks for sharing this meaningful thoughts of yours. :)
uniqdreamz #9
Chapter 69: A minute poem ? I couldn't even do a rondelet when I tried after reading Goodbye Tears. This is at least your good attempt ? Lol....
uniqdreamz #10
Chapter 30: I totally feel what you're trying to convey thru this poem. I couldn't agree more....just the road to recovery is a little harder.