To and Fro

Pieces of a Shattered Heart
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this was second (shakespearean)sonnet i've written after some deeper learning, i realized what i wrote in the past weren't even sonnets lol...i just got excited to try after learning the format.....it was really silly...as usual.....but this was long ago...okokfine...even now i still write silly stuffs...whatever...

 

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to and fro the deep green sea...
no matter how deep,
i shall dive together with thee...
a promise even gulls couldn't keep.

to and fro the thick, dry wilderness...
even black horses couldn't enjoy the withering breeze,
but with thou will i be in harness...
to keep thy heart and mine, always at ease.

to and fro the wide, endless sky...
thou ought to take me as a riddle,
still i would follow thee fly...
my vow; no one shall fiddle.

to and fro those bright, lustful arms... thou had lost my meek fingers, 
as this weak heart shatters, my perfect vow remains solitude,... and lingers...

 

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Created: Jul 27 2007

 

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Hey guys, you probly don't want to know...but i've added the movie screencap for ch47 poem. xD...watch it if you're interested.

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flawlessey
#1
Chapter 91: i could relate to this poem so much;-;
bibiii_bb #2
Chapter 80: This is my favourite
bibiii_bb #3
Chapter 62: Hey there.. I still read your poem, from the start☺ I start it all over after I've read all of them. Searching for some inspiration and as an escape I might say
bibiii_bb #4
Chapter 68: Through times your poem has grew within me, because all of your poem pretty much the sum up of my life. ohh yaa, and been a reader from the start. Just idk what to respond :D
uniqdreamz #5
Chapter 74: Who said this wasted an hour of precious sleep ? :) Give me more than an hour and I still couldn't come up with this. I know that till this day I definitely wanna be a tourist for life if only it's possible....reality bites..
uniqdreamz #6
Chapter 29: This is simple but it summed up what I think is true :)
uniqdreamz #7
Chapter 71: A little confusion here...do you meant music is one's favorite friend ? I don't know if I'm right but music is definitely my favorite companion when I'm down....thanks. Lol.
uniqdreamz #8
Chapter 70: I do hope what you've written works for your friend... and thanks for sharing this meaningful thoughts of yours. :)
uniqdreamz #9
Chapter 69: A minute poem ? I couldn't even do a rondelet when I tried after reading Goodbye Tears. This is at least your good attempt ? Lol....
uniqdreamz #10
Chapter 30: I totally feel what you're trying to convey thru this poem. I couldn't agree more....just the road to recovery is a little harder.