Silent Reader

Pieces of a Shattered Heart
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my hunger for poetry made me went to look around for more formats to play with...and i found about Acrostic poetry, where first letter of each line spells a word, usually use the same words as in the title. so no end rhyming here...hmm, this look easy and interesting...so, presenting my first acrostic poetry...lol. the subject came spontaneously. sorry for the harsh language though...though really, should i be sorry?, i thought of using the word 'force' in the last line instead of that one i used...but i thought i want something that sound more powerful...and tadaa...hope you'll enjoy it...haa. dedicated to all of you my silent readers...and other writers' silent readers as well...this one's for you, fellow frustrated writers.

 

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So you think you're all high and dandy
In fanfics you lurk, and read every word
Leaving everytime with not a single feedback, nor a thank you
Each time returning when you see an update's ready
Not bothered if your silence would only cause hurt
The only concern is your own pleasure, all else adieu


Reading their brainchild should suffice to make them happy
Even though their creations ain't all that, you showed mercy
All they know though, is to keep complaining like a bird
Don't they know their writings are not worth your elusive time, haven't they heard?
Exactly what are they still expecting and trying to brew?
Rest assured they can keep argue, but you'll be back, the par

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Hey guys, you probly don't want to know...but i've added the movie screencap for ch47 poem. xD...watch it if you're interested.

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flawlessey
#1
Chapter 91: i could relate to this poem so much;-;
bibiii_bb #2
Chapter 80: This is my favourite
bibiii_bb #3
Chapter 62: Hey there.. I still read your poem, from the start☺ I start it all over after I've read all of them. Searching for some inspiration and as an escape I might say
bibiii_bb #4
Chapter 68: Through times your poem has grew within me, because all of your poem pretty much the sum up of my life. ohh yaa, and been a reader from the start. Just idk what to respond :D
uniqdreamz #5
Chapter 74: Who said this wasted an hour of precious sleep ? :) Give me more than an hour and I still couldn't come up with this. I know that till this day I definitely wanna be a tourist for life if only it's possible....reality bites..
uniqdreamz #6
Chapter 29: This is simple but it summed up what I think is true :)
uniqdreamz #7
Chapter 71: A little confusion here...do you meant music is one's favorite friend ? I don't know if I'm right but music is definitely my favorite companion when I'm down....thanks. Lol.
uniqdreamz #8
Chapter 70: I do hope what you've written works for your friend... and thanks for sharing this meaningful thoughts of yours. :)
uniqdreamz #9
Chapter 69: A minute poem ? I couldn't even do a rondelet when I tried after reading Goodbye Tears. This is at least your good attempt ? Lol....
uniqdreamz #10
Chapter 30: I totally feel what you're trying to convey thru this poem. I couldn't agree more....just the road to recovery is a little harder.