Unfair

Pieces of a Shattered Heart
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How could you be so unfair?
You're nothing but a beautiful snare
You pulled your preys into your lair
Yet you only ever keep going there
While here, not a glance you would spare
When we too, have done our share
Of this wound, are you even aware?
Or perhaps you don't even care
Maybe our worth is too little to compare
Or to you, a little justice would only impair
Perhaps our hearts only belong in midair
Could it be that in your map, we're just nowhere?
Whatever it is, you've chosen to be unfair
Leaving me drowning in the pitch-black, abyss of despair
And yet, of this pain I continue to bear
Waiting for a day you'll breathe our air
Waiting for the day, you'll take the first step to be fair.
It's just unfair.

 

4:57p.m., March 07, 2015

 

this has somewhat similar vibe as sad isn't it? a little more angry maybe? idk... another monorhyme, if it ain't obvious already
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Hey guys, you probly don't want to know...but i've added the movie screencap for ch47 poem. xD...watch it if you're interested.

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flawlessey
#1
Chapter 91: i could relate to this poem so much;-;
bibiii_bb #2
Chapter 80: This is my favourite
bibiii_bb #3
Chapter 62: Hey there.. I still read your poem, from the start☺ I start it all over after I've read all of them. Searching for some inspiration and as an escape I might say
bibiii_bb #4
Chapter 68: Through times your poem has grew within me, because all of your poem pretty much the sum up of my life. ohh yaa, and been a reader from the start. Just idk what to respond :D
uniqdreamz #5
Chapter 74: Who said this wasted an hour of precious sleep ? :) Give me more than an hour and I still couldn't come up with this. I know that till this day I definitely wanna be a tourist for life if only it's possible....reality bites..
uniqdreamz #6
Chapter 29: This is simple but it summed up what I think is true :)
uniqdreamz #7
Chapter 71: A little confusion here...do you meant music is one's favorite friend ? I don't know if I'm right but music is definitely my favorite companion when I'm down....thanks. Lol.
uniqdreamz #8
Chapter 70: I do hope what you've written works for your friend... and thanks for sharing this meaningful thoughts of yours. :)
uniqdreamz #9
Chapter 69: A minute poem ? I couldn't even do a rondelet when I tried after reading Goodbye Tears. This is at least your good attempt ? Lol....
uniqdreamz #10
Chapter 30: I totally feel what you're trying to convey thru this poem. I couldn't agree more....just the road to recovery is a little harder.