Lucky Star

Pieces of a Shattered Heart
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let's just say i got really fascinated by these forms of poems...giving a try on triolet today...xD mine is very loose n not any great or following any syllable restriction...too lazy for that n besides...this is the third i'm writing already n i'm tired of trying to make the rhymes/sylable better...so...yeah....i'm just having so much fun xD...

 

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Twinkle twinkle lucky star
When will you descend and be mine?
Oh, how you sparkle as you hang afar
Twinkle twinkle lucky star
I wonder who you possibly are
Behind those smiles that glimmer so fine
Twinkle twinkle lucky star
When will you descend and be mine?

 

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created: April 7/8 2014

 

 

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Hey guys, you probly don't want to know...but i've added the movie screencap for ch47 poem. xD...watch it if you're interested.
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flawlessey #1
Chapter 91: i could relate to this poem so much;-;
bibiii_bb #2
Chapter 80: This is my favourite
bibiii_bb #3
Chapter 62: Hey there.. I still read your poem, from the start☺ I start it all over after I've read all of them. Searching for some inspiration and as an escape I might say
bibiii_bb #4
Chapter 68: Through times your poem has grew within me, because all of your poem pretty much the sum up of my life. ohh yaa, and been a reader from the start. Just idk what to respond :D
uniqdreamz #5
Chapter 74: Who said this wasted an hour of precious sleep ? :) Give me more than an hour and I still couldn't come up with this. I know that till this day I definitely wanna be a tourist for life if only it's possible....reality bites..
uniqdreamz #6
Chapter 29: This is simple but it summed up what I think is true :)
uniqdreamz #7
Chapter 71: A little confusion here...do you meant music is one's favorite friend ? I don't know if I'm right but music is definitely my favorite companion when I'm down....thanks. Lol.
uniqdreamz #8
Chapter 70: I do hope what you've written works for your friend... and thanks for sharing this meaningful thoughts of yours. :)
uniqdreamz #9
Chapter 69: A minute poem ? I couldn't even do a rondelet when I tried after reading Goodbye Tears. This is at least your good attempt ? Lol....
uniqdreamz #10
Chapter 30: I totally feel what you're trying to convey thru this poem. I couldn't agree more....just the road to recovery is a little harder.
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