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Pieces of a Shattered Heart
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The night is so dark, it swallows my soul
My heart is long burnt, now a piece of coal
Too long I waited in this air so cruel
They come, they go, but I stay like a fool

 

Save me from falling deeper in this hole
The night is so dark, it swallows my soul
Be my saviour, rescue me like a knight
For my prince charming, I'll wait day till night

 

I wish you're here, though to admit, I won't
For, my pride is worn, now merely a stone
The night is so dark, it swallows my soul
Yet I know your mere presence makes me whole

 

You breezed in, lighting fire in the cold
Making me forget the woes of growing old
But you're just a dream, an unreachable goal
The night is so dark, it swallows my soul

 

 

 

12:51a.m., january 25, 2016

- a sloppy attempt at quatern ugh...i hate how i become restrained n lose some of the essence of what i really want whenever i try out patterns...

- this poem is dedicated to my beloved Hong Jiwoo...from this fic. maybe i'll write poems for her again inspired by the continuation months...i still don't feel this poem does justice to what she really felt for herself n the guy she met there. hm

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Hey guys, you probly don't want to know...but i've added the movie screencap for ch47 poem. xD...watch it if you're interested.

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flawlessey
#1
Chapter 91: i could relate to this poem so much;-;
bibiii_bb #2
Chapter 80: This is my favourite
bibiii_bb #3
Chapter 62: Hey there.. I still read your poem, from the start☺ I start it all over after I've read all of them. Searching for some inspiration and as an escape I might say
bibiii_bb #4
Chapter 68: Through times your poem has grew within me, because all of your poem pretty much the sum up of my life. ohh yaa, and been a reader from the start. Just idk what to respond :D
uniqdreamz #5
Chapter 74: Who said this wasted an hour of precious sleep ? :) Give me more than an hour and I still couldn't come up with this. I know that till this day I definitely wanna be a tourist for life if only it's possible....reality bites..
uniqdreamz #6
Chapter 29: This is simple but it summed up what I think is true :)
uniqdreamz #7
Chapter 71: A little confusion here...do you meant music is one's favorite friend ? I don't know if I'm right but music is definitely my favorite companion when I'm down....thanks. Lol.
uniqdreamz #8
Chapter 70: I do hope what you've written works for your friend... and thanks for sharing this meaningful thoughts of yours. :)
uniqdreamz #9
Chapter 69: A minute poem ? I couldn't even do a rondelet when I tried after reading Goodbye Tears. This is at least your good attempt ? Lol....
uniqdreamz #10
Chapter 30: I totally feel what you're trying to convey thru this poem. I couldn't agree more....just the road to recovery is a little harder.