Beautiful (fangirling)

Pieces of a Shattered Heart
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this is kinda messed up all sorts. first of all, i made up the poem style...usually....it's determined by syllables...but here, i'm just playing with number of words n mirroring instead/if you look carefully at the form you'll see what i'm playing with/...some part could be considered freeverse...but overall let's just say...this is simply incoherent fangirling(since when is fangirling coherent anyway? lol. not in a very shallow way though...i take pride in that.../shot/)...that came upon while watching n listening to a moving performance for a couple of days already...very few singers can inject this kinda feels through their singing for me...just don't ask who...lol. n hey, it turned out shaped like letter B-for beautiful. so, can we call it shape poetry too? xD

 

Beautiful,
defines you,
what you are,
the way you sound,
how you make me feel
with every song you sweetly croon,
feeling every word you intone
as your voice echoes,
emitting emotions effortlessly
like magic,
genuinely
feelings felt
with every rendition,
radiating from within you,
the sincerity of your passion,
with every secret smile to yourself,
they can be felt, dazzlingly,
so divine it's sinful.
How come you're
so genuinely
beautiful?

 

 

created: june 19/20, 2014

 

/me died of overcheesiness/

 

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Hey guys, you probly don't want to know...but i've added the movie screencap for ch47 poem. xD...watch it if you're interested.

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flawlessey
#1
Chapter 91: i could relate to this poem so much;-;
bibiii_bb #2
Chapter 80: This is my favourite
bibiii_bb #3
Chapter 62: Hey there.. I still read your poem, from the start☺ I start it all over after I've read all of them. Searching for some inspiration and as an escape I might say
bibiii_bb #4
Chapter 68: Through times your poem has grew within me, because all of your poem pretty much the sum up of my life. ohh yaa, and been a reader from the start. Just idk what to respond :D
uniqdreamz #5
Chapter 74: Who said this wasted an hour of precious sleep ? :) Give me more than an hour and I still couldn't come up with this. I know that till this day I definitely wanna be a tourist for life if only it's possible....reality bites..
uniqdreamz #6
Chapter 29: This is simple but it summed up what I think is true :)
uniqdreamz #7
Chapter 71: A little confusion here...do you meant music is one's favorite friend ? I don't know if I'm right but music is definitely my favorite companion when I'm down....thanks. Lol.
uniqdreamz #8
Chapter 70: I do hope what you've written works for your friend... and thanks for sharing this meaningful thoughts of yours. :)
uniqdreamz #9
Chapter 69: A minute poem ? I couldn't even do a rondelet when I tried after reading Goodbye Tears. This is at least your good attempt ? Lol....
uniqdreamz #10
Chapter 30: I totally feel what you're trying to convey thru this poem. I couldn't agree more....just the road to recovery is a little harder.