Smiling Guitar

Pieces of a Shattered Heart
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i wanted to do another form of poem i haven't try...but i don't think longer poem would suit this idea...so...^^...another triolet...this time, pentameter triolet.

inspired by my current girlcrush...xD

HERE though the real inspiration came from this perf. i wanted to write a fic, but since that'd take some time...i'm writing this poem first to commemorate the feels, haha...i must be going crazy...she's so cool though. well, all members are so cool, the band is cool n their songs are awesome. /fangirling time/

 

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Oh look at that smiling bright black guitar
In the arms of his vigilant fangirl
Cradled and caressed like an idol star
Oh look at that smiling bright black guitar
His triumphant cries screeching from afar
Together they dance, they twist and they twirl
Oh look at that smiling bright black guitar
In the arms of his vigilant fangirl

 

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created april 20/21 2014

 

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Hey guys, you probly don't want to know...but i've added the movie screencap for ch47 poem. xD...watch it if you're interested.

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flawlessey
#1
Chapter 91: i could relate to this poem so much;-;
bibiii_bb #2
Chapter 80: This is my favourite
bibiii_bb #3
Chapter 62: Hey there.. I still read your poem, from the start☺ I start it all over after I've read all of them. Searching for some inspiration and as an escape I might say
bibiii_bb #4
Chapter 68: Through times your poem has grew within me, because all of your poem pretty much the sum up of my life. ohh yaa, and been a reader from the start. Just idk what to respond :D
uniqdreamz #5
Chapter 74: Who said this wasted an hour of precious sleep ? :) Give me more than an hour and I still couldn't come up with this. I know that till this day I definitely wanna be a tourist for life if only it's possible....reality bites..
uniqdreamz #6
Chapter 29: This is simple but it summed up what I think is true :)
uniqdreamz #7
Chapter 71: A little confusion here...do you meant music is one's favorite friend ? I don't know if I'm right but music is definitely my favorite companion when I'm down....thanks. Lol.
uniqdreamz #8
Chapter 70: I do hope what you've written works for your friend... and thanks for sharing this meaningful thoughts of yours. :)
uniqdreamz #9
Chapter 69: A minute poem ? I couldn't even do a rondelet when I tried after reading Goodbye Tears. This is at least your good attempt ? Lol....
uniqdreamz #10
Chapter 30: I totally feel what you're trying to convey thru this poem. I couldn't agree more....just the road to recovery is a little harder.