CHAPTER 4

You Kissed Me and Left Me.

(Lizzie is getting ready for her date)

Alexander: "What are you wearing?"

 

Lizzie: An out for my date tonight. 

Alexander: Where are you going for your date?

Lizzie: A Salsa dancing club. 

Alexander have fun. (He walks away) 

With Kevin:

Kevin's outfit:

Eli: Do you know how Salsa?

Kevin: Yes I looked it up online last night.

Eli: Thats good. Make sure she's having a good time.

Kevin thanks. (Eli walks away. Kevin thinks to himself) I hope I don't look like an idoit. 

With Lizzie: 

(The door bell rings) 

Lizzie: I'll get it. (Answers the door) Hi Kevin. 

Kevin: WOW. (Think's she's gotten hotter) Hi Lizzie. 

Lizzie: Bey Alex. (They leave)

THE DATE:

Kevin: Are you ready to dance?

Lizzie: I'm ready. Are you?

Kevin: I was born ready. 

(The music starts and they start dancing)

*Pertend this is Lizzie and Kevin*

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=amO1sDZlrkI 

After:

(They are sitting on a couch at the place)

Lizzie: I never knew you could Salsa. 

Kevin: You don't everything about me. 

Lizzie: Oh really. (He puts is arm around her shoulder) 

Kevin: Just kiding. To be honest I went on line and looked up how to salsa. 

Lizzie: Me too because I didn't want to look bad infront you Oppa. 

Kevin: I just remembered I have busy sedual tomowwor so we have get going.

Lizzie: I start work pretty early tomowwor. 

At Lizzie's apparment:

Kevin: I had great time tonight.

Lizzie: Me too. 

(She stand on tippy-toes he bends down there lips touch and they close thier eyes and start kissing)

END OF CHAPTER. 

 

 

 

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ab2utifulrose
#1
Chapter 20: whaaaa.... this is the end???? already?????
YouBeDuhy
#2
Chapter 1: Omg I'm listening to music right now and the playlist is on shuffle. I'm about to read the first chapter and Neverland starts playing. I mean out of all the songs on my playlist one of Ukiss' songs plays. Sorry for this random comment just wanted to share what happened.
XxSophiaxX
#3
Chapter 5: So cute !!! I hope they used protection not to have a baby o-0
Cbearz #4
Chapter 2: I love the story
idiosyncrxtic
#5
just try to fix your spelling mistakes in the foreword and ch.1 and maybe try to write it narrative style rather than playwright.i think using descriptive phrases can help a reader imagine and set deeper into the text (rather than telling us the scene straightout in brackets)
. other than that i believe this story has potential (quite interesting already c: ) ~FIGHTING! xDD