CHAPTER 14

You Kissed Me and Left Me.

Soohyun: Kevin when are going to propose to Lizzie?

Kevin: Soon.

Hoon: How?

Kevin: I don't know.

Kiseop: Where?

Kevin: I don't know and what's with all these questions?

Dongho: Relax Hyun were just messing with you.

Kevin: I don't even have the ring yet.

Eli: What does she like?

Kevin: She said she wanted a diamon ring and it doesn't want it to be too big.

Eli: You shoul probally get the ring if you want to propose to her soon. 

Kevin: I no but I need some keep her busy while I go shopping for it. 

Soohyun: Ask Luna to hang out with her cuz there bestfriends.

Kevin: Thanks Hyun.

U-KISS at the jewlary store:

Sales person: Hello how can I help you?

Kevin: I'm looking for engagement ring for my girlfriend.

Sale's person: What do think she would like?

Kevin: She said wanted a diamond ring but she doesn't a super big rock.

Sale's person: I have the perfect thing for her.

The ring:

 

Kevin: She'll love it. 

Sale's person: What's her ring size?

Kevin: She said she was a size 7.

Sale's person: You're in luck because that's a size 7. I'll box it up for you. (He pays)

Kevin: Thank you. (They leave)

At the dorm:

Hoon: Now you need plan the proposal.

Kevin: Okay. 

Kiseop: It has to be perfect.

Soohyun: And something she'll remember forever.

Eli: We'll help you with it.

Kevin: I'm going to do it our next live performance. I'm going tell the people thier my plan so they don't cut to commerical or cut to anything eles. 

Dongho: Nooa will love that. 

Kevin: She won't even know.

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ab2utifulrose
#1
Chapter 20: whaaaa.... this is the end???? already?????
YouBeDuhy
#2
Chapter 1: Omg I'm listening to music right now and the playlist is on shuffle. I'm about to read the first chapter and Neverland starts playing. I mean out of all the songs on my playlist one of Ukiss' songs plays. Sorry for this random comment just wanted to share what happened.
XxSophiaxX
#3
Chapter 5: So cute !!! I hope they used protection not to have a baby o-0
Cbearz #4
Chapter 2: I love the story
idiosyncrxtic
#5
just try to fix your spelling mistakes in the foreword and ch.1 and maybe try to write it narrative style rather than playwright.i think using descriptive phrases can help a reader imagine and set deeper into the text (rather than telling us the scene straightout in brackets)
. other than that i believe this story has potential (quite interesting already c: ) ~FIGHTING! xDD