CHAPTER 17

You Kissed Me and Left Me.

The next day wedding rehersal:

Offical person:  Woo Sunghyun (Kevin) Do you take Lee Mi Gi (Lizzie) to be your wife?

Kevin: I do.

Offical person: Lee Mi Gi (Lizzie) Do you have Kevin to be your husband?

Lizzie: I do. 

Offical person: You make kiss the bride: (They kiss and everyone claps and cheers)

After:

Lizzie: I'm so excited. 

Luna: You're going to marry the man of your dreams. 

Lizzie: He's a great guy I'm so lucky to be marrying him

Luna: I have to go but I'll see before the wedding hopefully. 

Lizzie: Bey. (Luna leaves)

Kevin: I'm so lucky I found you after all these years.

Lizzie: The real reason I came to Korea was so I could find you.

Kevin: Were getting married now. (They kiss)

End of chapter

Sorry it's short the next one will be longer

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ab2utifulrose
#1
Chapter 20: whaaaa.... this is the end???? already?????
YouBeDuhy
#2
Chapter 1: Omg I'm listening to music right now and the playlist is on shuffle. I'm about to read the first chapter and Neverland starts playing. I mean out of all the songs on my playlist one of Ukiss' songs plays. Sorry for this random comment just wanted to share what happened.
XxSophiaxX
#3
Chapter 5: So cute !!! I hope they used protection not to have a baby o-0
Cbearz #4
Chapter 2: I love the story
idiosyncrxtic
#5
just try to fix your spelling mistakes in the foreword and ch.1 and maybe try to write it narrative style rather than playwright.i think using descriptive phrases can help a reader imagine and set deeper into the text (rather than telling us the scene straightout in brackets)
. other than that i believe this story has potential (quite interesting already c: ) ~FIGHTING! xDD