CHAPTER 11

You Kissed Me and Left Me.

The next day:

(All of U-KISS is up)

Dongho: Noona.

Lizzie: Yeah.

Dongho: I don't feel well.

Lizzie: You're not sick.

Dongho: Noona what are you talking about?

Lizzie: I see the the red marker in your pocket and some of the red dots are my hand from I thought you had a fever. Go wash your face and don't do it again.

Dongho: Okay Noona. (He leaves)

Soohyun: Sorry about that he's still a kid and trys to get out certain things and doesn't understand he's an idol and he needs to certain things.

Lizzie: It's alright. ( Soohyun joins the others at the table. Kevin pokes in the sides making Lizzie jump a little) Good morning Oppa.

Kevin: Good morning. (They Kiss)

Hoon: I don't to see you two kissing when I'm eating. (They continute kissing)

Eli: We serious have go. (Everyone leaves the dorm)

U-KISS Dance pratice:

(A female dancer comes up to Lizzie. Lizzie is sitting on the floor)

Dancer: Unnie is okay that I dance with your Oppa?

Lizzie: Yeah it's dancing and I understand it's part of his job. (She get's in her place.)

Kevin: You're in for a surpise baby. (The music starts)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ac2BZY96qS8&feature=relmfu

Kevin: What did you think? (The dancers have left)

Lizzie: It was aswome. The intro was really cool and "Stop Girl" will make fan girls go grazy.

Kevin: What do mean by fangirls?

Lizzie: The KISSME's community.  (Kevin give a look telling them to go away and they do.)

Kevin: Admit you were fangirling over me. 

Lizzie: Oppa I can't show favoriteism just because you're my boyfriend.

Kevin: I saw the look on your face when it was my part. 

Lizzie: Okay Oppa you're right I was fangirling over you. (He picks her up she smiles and he kisses her possionately and kisses back the same way.)

Later:

Kiseop: "Stop Girl" the coulored version will be on TV.

Dongho: Hurry up turn it on!

Lizzie: Relax it is just like the black and white version.

Eli: They just wanna see girls (dancers) in the video.

Soohyun: There such children. 

Dongho: No I don't wanna see the female dancers. 

Kiseop: I wanna see the female dancers.

Kevin: We all know Dongho you do. 

Lizzie: Let's just watch the video.

The video:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d_AwyTp9qb0&feature=plcp

END OF CHAPTER!

 

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ab2utifulrose
#1
Chapter 20: whaaaa.... this is the end???? already?????
YouBeDuhy
#2
Chapter 1: Omg I'm listening to music right now and the playlist is on shuffle. I'm about to read the first chapter and Neverland starts playing. I mean out of all the songs on my playlist one of Ukiss' songs plays. Sorry for this random comment just wanted to share what happened.
XxSophiaxX
#3
Chapter 5: So cute !!! I hope they used protection not to have a baby o-0
Cbearz #4
Chapter 2: I love the story
idiosyncrxtic
#5
just try to fix your spelling mistakes in the foreword and ch.1 and maybe try to write it narrative style rather than playwright.i think using descriptive phrases can help a reader imagine and set deeper into the text (rather than telling us the scene straightout in brackets)
. other than that i believe this story has potential (quite interesting already c: ) ~FIGHTING! xDD