CHAPTER 16

You Kissed Me and Left Me.

The next day:

(Luna and Lizzie wedding dress shopping her older cousin Alexander is there too Her mom flew in from the USA)

Constalant: What kind of wedding dress are looking for?

Lizzie: I was think of A-line wedding dress.

Constalant: What is the price point?

Lizzie's Umma (Mom): You can have anything you want.

Constalant: Alright. Who have with you?

Lizzie: I have my bestfriend Luna, my older cousin Alexander, and Mom the one paying for the dress.

Constalant: Let's get started. (Her Lizzie go off the dressing room) Tell me about your wedding.

Lizzie: Because he's Korean/American and I'm Korean/American/Chinese we wan't into include all 3 cultuers I have 3 wedding dress changes. Today I want buy an American dress, a Korean one, and a Chinese one. My mom is paying for American one, Luna is paying for Korean one, and Alexander is playing for the Chinese one. 

Constalant: Okay.

A few dress later:

Korean Wedding dress: 

Chinses Wedding Dress:

 

 

American Wedding Dress:

 

Later:

Luna: It was nice having your Umma (Mom) join us.

Lizzie: I really liked it. 

Alexander: I'll you two later:

Lizzie and Luna: Bey Xander. (He leaves)

Lizzie: I'll need help bring these back to the dorm.

Luna: I'll help you. Unni just don't let Kevin Sunbae see these dresses because it's bad luck if he does.

Lizzie: I also want it to a be surprize. 

Later:

Kevin: Did you have a good day?

Lizzie: Yes. Did you Oppa?

Kevin: It alright nothing special. 

Lizzie: Did you book the hotle for our wedding night?

Kevin: Yes  I did. 

Lizzie: Perfect. 

Soohyun: Don't get too excited because it's not you're wedding quiet yet.

Hoon: Do you know who your best man will be?

Kevin: I picked Eli because he gave some good avice about being a relationship.

Eli: Thanks man. Lizzie who is your maid of honor?

Lizzie: Luna. 

Kiseop: You two are best friends so it's makes alot of scenc that you chose her.

Dongho: I'm hungy.

Soohyun: Alright, just wait a minute. 

(They've had dinner and now everyone is sleeping)

End of chapter.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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ab2utifulrose
#1
Chapter 20: whaaaa.... this is the end???? already?????
YouBeDuhy
#2
Chapter 1: Omg I'm listening to music right now and the playlist is on shuffle. I'm about to read the first chapter and Neverland starts playing. I mean out of all the songs on my playlist one of Ukiss' songs plays. Sorry for this random comment just wanted to share what happened.
XxSophiaxX
#3
Chapter 5: So cute !!! I hope they used protection not to have a baby o-0
Cbearz #4
Chapter 2: I love the story
idiosyncrxtic
#5
just try to fix your spelling mistakes in the foreword and ch.1 and maybe try to write it narrative style rather than playwright.i think using descriptive phrases can help a reader imagine and set deeper into the text (rather than telling us the scene straightout in brackets)
. other than that i believe this story has potential (quite interesting already c: ) ~FIGHTING! xDD