In debt

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''You saved me and now I'm in your debt.''

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''Don't jump!'' a cry ripped through Daehyun's clouded mind. 

His upper body was now hanging over the edge as he looked down at the passing cars. 
It was like reality hitting him straight on in the face and he wondered why he could see everything so clearly.

''Don't jump!''
The second cry was a lot quieter, almost like whisper brushing against the boys skin, sending shivers down his spine. 

He clinged on the fence, now turning his gaze to confront the person who was trying to take away his freedom.

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Foreword

Angst

Some chapters will probably be rated M for different reasons (beware!)

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I really don't know why I'm writing a new fic right now xD All the DAEJAE FEELS are killing me, so here it is... DaeJae in all its angsty glory ^___^

Comments and feedback are welcomed! 

Enjoy<3

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Woah, In Debt reached 100 subs!!! Thank you everyone! ^^
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kindaluvu #1
Chapter 13: Thank you for looking into Daehyun's view. Everyone sees him as a culprit and it's hard not to because he does hurt people. It seems like only Youngjae understands he is a miserable victim too. His situation is so hopeless my heart aches for him :( your story is one of the rare stories that I don't wish Daejae to be together but Jae to be able to forget Dae :(
YukariStarzYjae #2
Chapter 13: So beautiful..and sad tooo..
help me,too many emotion (╥╯﹏╰╥)ง
Seriously,thnk u for sharing such wonderful story..hwaiting on your others story authornim
RealFangirl #3
Chapter 13: oh im really cryingㅜㅜ thanks for ur story<3:'')) ur story's sofaking sad n beautiful n idk how to describe ma feeling rite now omfg ma heart's broken bc of daejae</3 i wanna curse..... a ma heart:''
cheonssa #4
Oh my God,,, I feel bad for youngjae,,, I know this is angst but I dont even expect this story will end up like this,,,
inixaw #5
Chapter 13: this is so beautiful and very heartbreaking. i could feel the pain, i cried. no wonder people from every places recommended this fic

it was great though
RainAndSunshine #6
Hi! I just read this and I'm out of words. The first chapters seriously sound all fluffy and nice, and you only slowly get the feeling that something's going terribly wrong. And the last chapter just killed me. I cried over the end, seriously. But as soon as I calmed down, I came up with an idea: I'd love to make a video for this, to the song I listened to when reading it. But of course, I won't do so without your permission. So let me know if you'd agree to this and then I'll give you the details of my plan (; Greets, Sunny^^
weirdstuff #7
Chapter 8: My godess, your story is so beautiful!!!!
mvdotsuki #8
Chapter 12: I was still kind of expecting a good ending so now I'm left dead inside and crying. And that's a good job, when you can make a person feel like that. It's not good for me though because I wanted happy DaeJae hahaha.. But really, great job!
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