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Blonde Haired Rebel *UNDER CONSTRUCTION*
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This is a horrible story why are you guys reading this!?

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ChoiHyemin
#1
Chapter 52: Whoa....finnaly i'm over read this story. I like it so much. But if only you will write more scene about Niel and Chunji. Also CAP which why can crushed hae ^^

Anyway good story author ^^
nielsgirl #2
Chapter 32: So it's Niel><nielsgirl
nielsgirl #3
Chapter 32: Umm my ultimate bias is...................................NIEL!!!!!
nielsgirl #4
Chapter 31: Your welcome owenluhan. I love this fanfiction! You are the best fanfic writer
95sbaby
#5
Chapter 27: tbh lol it's kinda confusing how many mysterious guys are there? First he sad he want's to crush hae cos he likes lindsey. Now he likes Hae? omfg my brain.
Jung2208 #6
Chapter 50: Kind of confusing but hey it's still a cute story^^
myraiera #7
Chapter 48: Awww.. so sweet.. i love it.. <3
myraiera #8
Chapter 48: Awww.. so sweet.. i love it.. <3
-2Mirae-
14 streak #9
Chapter 50: Awww i like the ending but i cant wait for the alternative ending!!!!!
dimple_beans
#10
Chapter 4: nice one that's all i can say because i can't describe it in words XD