Chapter 24: Let's Date!

Blonde Haired Rebel *UNDER CONSTRUCTION*
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I don't know why but it say this story is completed and it's not and I can't seem to get rid of the completed sign...So even though it says 'competed' it's not and won't be for a LOOONNGG time!  :D

Anyway I'm getting a lot of subscribers so yay:D

I update wayyy to much...I have no life...

Forever Alone! D':

Chapter 24: Let's Date!

Author's POV:

[HAE ZELO CHUNJI NIEL CAP CHANGJO RICKY LINDSEY L.JOE]

"Let's go!" says Zelo happily pulling Hae towards a ferris wheel.

"Uhh...Curly...I don't think that's such a good idea..." Hae says nervously. I'm deathly afraid of heights...And I don't trust those things one bit!

"Aww is someone scared?" Zelo mocks. 

"I am NOT!" Hae yells. "I'll go on it!" she says and starts to pull a smug Zelo with her.

I knew that'd work!
 

Look at that closeness! It's making me mad for some reason...

Look at them acting all buddy buddy! It's disgusting! Why do so many guys like her?

They look really close...

Teen Top follows them closely behind. Making sure that no one recongnizes them.

"Are you ready?" Zelo asks grinning once their on the ride. "If you're scared just hang onto me." he says to a worried looking Hae.

"Why would I be scared? I'm fine...Just perfect! There's nothing to be afraid of!" Hae says trying to sound confident. Except falling, dying, getting stuck...

"Relax Hae." Zelo says gently. "I'm here, just hold my hand." Zelo says taking hold of Hae's hand tightly. 'I'll protect you." She's so cute when she's scared

Hae blushes and looks down which was a big mistake as she sees how far away fromt he ground she is. She squeezes Zelo's hand tighter and closes her eyes.

"It's okay...I'm here, I'll protect you." Zelo says gently patting her head. "You can count on me..."

Hae felt her stomach do a couple of flips.

What's this? This feeling in the pit of my stomach? Kind of like the feeling I have when I'm around L.Joe...

 

"They look like their having a good time." CAP says watching the two from the ground. This makes my job easier.

"They do don't they..." Niel says sadly. The chance was gone before I even had a chance to try...

"Nah they look like a couple of friends just hanging out!" Chunji says. If friends do that...

Chunji must be in denial...

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ChoiHyemin
#1
Chapter 52: Whoa....finnaly i'm over read this story. I like it so much. But if only you will write more scene about Niel and Chunji. Also CAP which why can crushed hae ^^

Anyway good story author ^^
nielsgirl #2
Chapter 32: So it's Niel><nielsgirl
nielsgirl #3
Chapter 32: Umm my ultimate bias is...................................NIEL!!!!!
nielsgirl #4
Chapter 31: Your welcome owenluhan. I love this fanfiction! You are the best fanfic writer
95sbaby
#5
Chapter 27: tbh lol it's kinda confusing how many mysterious guys are there? First he sad he want's to crush hae cos he likes lindsey. Now he likes Hae? omfg my brain.
Jung2208 #6
Chapter 50: Kind of confusing but hey it's still a cute story^^
myraiera #7
Chapter 48: Awww.. so sweet.. i love it.. <3
myraiera #8
Chapter 48: Awww.. so sweet.. i love it.. <3
-2Mirae-
14 streak #9
Chapter 50: Awww i like the ending but i cant wait for the alternative ending!!!!!
dimple_beans
#10
Chapter 4: nice one that's all i can say because i can't describe it in words XD