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Dance To the Melody

Eunhee's POV

 

“… The Syndicate!”

When the MC called out our band, I was in a state of shock and was totally speechless. I heard E-Young gasped and Injoon was gawking at the corner of my eyes. I couldn’t believe what I’ve just heard but the results were right there in front of us and it showed that we won to 4Minute by five votes. I was rooted into place, and was gazing at the big screen with mixed emotions when suddenly E-young took my hand and dragged me towards the stage.

“Come on! We need to thank the crowd at least!” E-Young grinned as she pulled me along.

Still a little bewildered, I stumbled my way up the stage while the audience gave their final round of applause. After showing our gratitude and appreciation by bowing countless of times, unintentionally, I looked up and scanned the crowd until my eyes set upon a figure. He was standing there amongst the crowd with his arms crossed and the usual crooked smile on his face. Even if I couldn’t read his expression at that time, just by seeing him, and knowing that he came to watch our performance was more than enough to make me feel that it was all worth it and that I could smile with no regrets.   

 

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Back at the dressing room, E-Young was so happy we won the showdown that she couldn’t stop talking about the performance. I was in a good mood myself that I didn’t mind listening to her chatter and just went along with her even if it was a little exaggerated.

“Eunhee-ah, did you see the crowd’s reactions when you suddenly pop up from under the stage? They went wild, wild I tell you!” said E-young cheerfully for the umpteenth time as I stepped out of the changing room. 

“Really?” I asked, grinning at her while tying my hair up into a simple ponytail. “My attention wasn’t fully on the audience since I was concentrating on singing and playing the guitar. The stage lights were a little blinding too.”

“Yup, I guess they were taken aback. Who would’ve thought that we would use the rising platform, we never used them before in our performances,” said E-Young, nodding her head while sitting back on her chair. “To be honest, when you brought up those ideas I had doubts that it would work but then it turned out to be brilliant,” she grinned as she gave me the thumbs up.

I merely chuckled. “Is that a compliment I hear?” I cheekily asked as I started to pack up my things. “That’s a rare thing to hear, especially from you.”   

E-young crossed her arms, stuck her tongue out and turned her back on me just as I heard a few knocks on the door.

“Eh?” we both turned our attention at the door.

When we heard another knock, E-Young jumped down from her chair and rushed towards the door. “I’ll get it!”

My mood suddenly dropped once our visitor stepped into the room. Seeing the situation, E-Young immediately grabbed her things and nodded at me before dashing out, forgetting to close the door.

I heaved a sigh and crossed my arms before turning my attention to the person in front of me. Well, I knew that we would have to face each other again sooner or later.

“Yes?” I asked indifferently. “If you have something to say then please make it quick, I don’t have the time or energy to argue with you.”

Jihyun pursed her lips in hesitation before answering, “Don’t worry, I’ll get straight to the point. Your band won fair and square so I’ll stop pestering you and you can continue on being Myungsoo’s dance partner.”

I blinked and kept my mouth shut since I didn’t have anything to say to her. There was a moment of awkward silence that made her a little uncomfortable.

“But I’m not going to apologize because I know that you won’t forgive me anyway,” said Jihyun, trying to keep a straight face.  

I rolled my eyes. “At least we both agree on something…” I mumbled.

“Well that’s all I have to say, see you around,” she said before walking out of the room, closing the door behind her.

When she finally left, I let out another sigh, one problem solved. I hoped that nothing like this will ever happen again because it really did drain my energy, physically and emotionally.

I continued to finish up packing my things when I heard another knock and the door being opened. I put down whatever I was holding in irritation and blew a few strands of hair that was covering my face.

I turned back once again with a glare and a slight frown. “What is it th-…” I choked on my words and my expression turned into surprise when I saw Myungsoo standing perfectly by the door with one hand in his pocket.

I heard him chuckle and was flashing that crooked smile of his. “Shouldn’t someone who just won the showdown not too long ago be smiling and in high spirits instead of frowning?”

I blushed and nervously looked down. “I’m sorry….” I muttered, still not confident enough to face him.

“Eunhee-ah,” he called. I slightly looked up and saw that his expression turned serious. “I should be the one apologizing,” said Myungsoo while taking in long strides towards me.

“Eh?” I straightened up, not believing what I’ve just heard. What surprised me more was that he unexpectedly embraced me. I was totally stunned by his sudden action that I felt my legs weakened and my heart was beating so rapidly that it was making me hard to breathe. My face would probably be red just like a tomato by now since I could feel the blood rushing in.      

“I’m sorry Eunhee-ah…” said Myungsoo softly, sounding sincere and apologetic. I was too shocked to utter a word or even blink so I just stood there stiffened and speechless in his embrace. I faintly felt his heart beating as fast but perhaps it was just my imagination since I was still in a daze. “I’m sorry for not being understanding or seeing through the lines… Now I know why you had to win and I’m thankful for that. I’m sorry for taking it out on you last time… You’ve been through a lot.”

“It’s not your fault…” I finally managed to reassure him while cautiously patted his back, smiling a little. We stayed like that for a couple of seconds but to me it felt like time had just stopped. I wanted to say something else, wanted to tell him how I missed him but it’s as if my tongue was stuck and nothing came out. Instead I asked him, “So, you’ll continue to teach me and we’ll start practicing again?”

Myungsoo gave out a heartfelt chuckle as he let go of me. “You missed me that much huh?” he teased me while ruffling my hair.

“Yah, I was just making sure that’s all. I don’t want all of my hard work keeping my place as your dance partner thrown to waste,” I gave my excuse as I tossed his hand away trying to hide my embarrassment.  

He then grinned and lightly flicked my forehead. “There’s no way I’m going to give up on you, Eunhee-ah,” he said as I grimaced in pain, rubbing my forehead. “Don’t worry; we’ll start practicing as soon as possible. By the way, the performance was awesome! You did great out there,” praised Myungsoo, giving me the thumbs up.    

  

Sungyeol’s POV  

 

As the excitement of the showdown died down and everyone has started to leave the auditorium, I was laughing along as Hoya and Dongwoo bickered about the bet they had agreed on earlier. It seemed that Dongwoo was still reluctant to give Hoya his money. Their little fight got my full attention that I didn’t realize Myungsoo had vanished from my side.

“Come on you two, continue your little quarrel someplace else! Stop embarrassing us!” Sunggyu tried to break their fight as we all stood up and decided to leave as well.

“Hey, where’s Myungsoo?” asked Woohyun, tapping my shoulder.

I shrugged. “Don’t know, he’s probably at the dorm already,” I answered as I looked around. Then I spotted Injoon and E-Young walking out from backstage but I noticed that Eunhee wasn’t with them so I assumed that she must still be at the dressing room. Right at that moment I decided to take the chance and congratulate her personally.

“You guys go on without me!” I shouted at the others as I ran down the steps and headed towards the backstage.

“Sungyeol-ah! Where are you going?” I heard Woohyun called after me.

“I’ll see you guys later!”

 

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As I ran down the corridor towards the dressing room, the chance that Eunhee had gone back to the dormitory flashed into my mind. But I immediately shook it away, there’s no harm in checking.  Even if she had left I could always go back and find her.

When I arrived, I saw the door was slightly ajar and the lights were still on. I smiled knowing that my prediction was right so I quickened my steps. But what I failed to predict was that someone else was already there before me.   

As I took hold of the handle and peeked through the gap, my eyes grew wide and my heart sank as jealousy took over. I couldn’t bear to watch the scene in front of me so I turned around and closed the door quietly behind me. I let out a disappointed sigh and gazed up at the ceiling trying to calm myself down. I really wanted to barge in there and break them apart but what prevented me was that I caught a glimpse of Eunhee’s expression. She looked so relieved and happy that I don’t have the heart to hurt her. Once again Myungsoo was a step ahead of me, and somehow I could guess where Eunhee’s heart is drawn into.   

I decided to head back to the dormitory and take a shower hoping that the water will wash all my pain away.

Until everything is clear and Eunhee has made her choice, I still have a chance don’t I?  

 

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I'm really sorry for the super late update! /bows 90°/

I've been caught up with school, assignments, exams, and life... but don't worry, I still want to finish this story

To those who have stuck with me all this time, I thank you so much and I love you!

To new readers, you are always welcome!

'Till next time ^_~

 

 

 

 

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Dear readers: I'll be having exams for 2 weeks so I won't be able to update T_T

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Choi_Kk
#1
Would please update this story? TT
I reall y love this OMG
I love how sweet Myungsoo and Sungyeol are.
This is a nice story I've ever read >_<
RisikaBlack #2
I really like it. I can't wait to read the following chapters ^^
Rini6189
#3
There are certain factors that can explain why 4Minute don't seem to be in high spirits to pull off a strong, captivating performance. Myungsoo is sharp to be able to notice this. Since they seem to be just doing it for show, there's no passion in their performance. It's like they've lost their touch when they don't know what dancing truly is anymore to them--like its value becomes lost to them over time. This happens to one's interest that doesn't become a passion. Passion is what keeps one grounded and focused on his/her lifelong dream/goal. Another possible factor could be anxiety about going up against The Syndicate in the showdown if they're worried about whether the band's performance would overpower theirs.

Great job with the details. Though, 4Minute's part seems to be lacking. I understand that it's hard for you to describe their dance routine since this isn't your area of interest. Anybody can get an idea of how their performance looks like from watching video clips of 2NE1 performing "I Am The Best."
Rini6189
#4
xD Sungjong and his divaness... Myungsoo is glad to have his friend back. It had been awkward and tense between the two of them when Sungyeol kept avoiding him after seeing the two sleeping next to each other. That didn't make it easy for him to be worried about his best friend. From watching her perform, Myungsoo understands Eunhee's love of music by the passion that she puts into her performance. It's like a reflection of himself in the way that he feels about dancing. Being a dance expert himself, it's easy for him to pick out any flaws in 4Minute's choreography. He could make a great dance teacher. With his help, Eunhee can improve on her dancing in time for the dance off between Jihyun and her. When there's a chance, he could make it up to her and apologize for his behavior towards her that one evening. "Sleepless Dream" is a nice song. For the audience to be moved by it, it must be a song that reaches out to them in spirit in which they can relate to it. The reaction from Eunhee, E-Young, and Injoon at the end can either be good or bad. Judging from the response they received from the audience as they were performing, it's likely that they've come out as the winner of this showdown. There's no doubt that Myungsoo and Sungyeol are among those who've voted for The Syndicate to show their support.

4Minute did come off as flashy in their performance since they're aiming to impress the audience with their dance moves. Being flashy isn't enough for a performance to move the audience. What's lacking in their performance is connection with the people watching them. This is what The Syndicate's performance has. It's what makes them the winner in this case.
KiD_HaeJoon #5
Next~they surely win...
Rini6189
#6
Hearing his confession seemed to have pulled somewhat on her heart strings. After an awkward pause, it looked like she shrugged it off and remarked jokingly to ease the tension in the air. Since she didn't know how else to respond, she figured that making light of the situation is the best way to go.

It's good that Sungyeol is speaking to Myungsoo again. Even though he was being harsh towards her, Myungsoo does care about her and mean well. Since he loves her, he's already forgiven her in his heart. The concern that's evident in his tone of voice proves it. Sungyeol's got a point, though. Myungsoo did come off as insensitive by not being understanding of her and her position. It seems that Sungyeol has matured despite his childish demeanor in order for him to say this to him. He is slowly turning into a man. Love can change a person.

So, Eunhee is not so oblivious after all. She is aware of her own feelings as well as others' around her. For her to not have the heart to reject him, she must be worried about hurting Sungyeol's feelings and causing a rift between them. He did a nice thing for her by being there for her when she needs to be comforted and some cheering up, so it won't feel right to her to kill the mood by turning him down. She is considerate to be concerned about his feelings. However, she's giving him false hope by not letting him know that she doesn't feel the same way. It's not awkward to tell him that she likes him as a friend or a brother. That's better than pushing him away or not showing any sign that she cares for him in some way. At least Sungyeol has the chance to prove himself to Eunhee in expressing his love for her. "Nothing ventured, nothing gained." Then he'd know when to give up with no regrets once he discovered that she doesn't return his feelings. It would be easier for him to let her go then so that she could be happy with the one she truly loves.

Do your best to describe the showdown in detail.
Rini6189
#7
I've decided to point out some mistakes I've spotted to help you improve on your English writing skills. It would be too much if I point out every single one. This is just to give you an idea of what to work on.

Some Ch. 17 mistakes:

I like you Eunhee
* Comma after "you"

why thank you there Sungyeol.
* Comma after "there"

I like you too my friend
* Comma after "too"

* Note: In some sentences, a pair of commas is needed to separate the title (like "my friend") or the name of the person from the entire phrase to make the whole thing flow smoothly when it serves as an interruption.
Example: This, my friend, is a Kitara.

I stopped on my tracks and placed my hand over my chest.
* The preposition should be "in" instead of "on."

You made her cry for God sake!
Correction: God's sake

She hasn’t made up her mind yet so I still have a chance
* Comma after "yet"

But if you ever make her cry again, I will certainly not let you go Myungsoo
* Comma after "go"

I turned my back on him as I pulled up the covers, leaving him there flabbergasted.
Correction: leaving him flabbergasted there

The showdown and showcase is nearing, plus I still need to improve my dancing skills.
Correction: The showdown and the showcase are nearing; plus, I still need to improve my dancing skills.

I gradually closed my eyes and with a tired heart, I finally fell asleep.
Correction #1: I gradually closed my eyes, and with a tired heart, I finally fell asleep.
Correction #2: I gradually closed my eyes. With a tired heart, I finally fell asleep.
lotsohugs4me
#8
keke I even thought Eunhee didn't know and aww so now sungyeol and myungsoo friendship is like this thats sad
what will happen next?
so curious keke
KiD_HaeJoon #9
Good,trying not to reject him..just say u like as friend^_^ no more awkward...will the next chapter have romantic part with myungsoo♥
Rini6189
#10
The Kitara looks like one hi-tech, cool instrument. I saw a little of how it works by checking out LED Apple, which you'd mentioned to me in one of your previous messages.

We can see how Eunhee came to love and appreciate music. It's because she was influenced by her father at a very young age. He taught her everything he knows about music. Through music, the two share a special bond. That's why she feels so strongly about music. It reminds her of her deceased father. In memory of him, she pours her heart and soul into the music she creates and plays.