Sweet Treats: You Put The L In Love

Description

Name:Acelina "Ace" McGarmin

Age:16

Likes:Music (Boys Like Girls, Green Day, Fall Out Boy, Vocaloid, Yuya Matsua,and Arivil Lavigne. Don't like them=I don't care), lollipops, ice cream, and drawing.

Personality: Kind, Sweet, Crazy, Funny, Unorgonized, inteligent.

.::Ch. 1::.

(My Past: You Don't Know Me)

Fire. It was my enime. Fire. The dancing flames were engulfing my home. With me inside. Along with my burning parent. The rotting stench of burning flesh engulfed my nose. "Help! *cough* Help me!" I cried as the flames were inching closer and closer towards me. "In here!" The door suddenly broke down as a swarm of people rushed inside. My body was lifted into the arms of a total stranger as they carried me out of the house and into the crisp autumn world outside. My lungs coughed and weased for air than black smoke. "Hurry, we need t get her to the hospitle!" A man ordered as I was placed on a white bed and lifted inside an ambulance. The siren seemed muffled through the metal walls. I was 8. I set my house on fire and burned my parents alive. And it was all because of a candle.

>>The Next Day>>

A stiff numbness filled my body. "Ugh. Ahhh." I grunted opening my eyes slowly. I was in a blinding white room. Everything just plain white. I already hated it. Just then the door creaked open. An old male in a black suit walked in allong with a boy about 10 ollowing him. My eyes closed just enough to make it look like I was still sleeping, but I could still see out of my eyelashes. A doctor in a long white coat walked in behind them and flipped through a chart. "So you are this girl's distand uncle?" He asked with an arched brow. The lights above reflecting off the shiney surface of his balding head. "Yes, I wish to take her back home with me as soon as possible." The old man stated. The young boy staired at me. His hair was a mess with darked rimmed eyes to mach his blue tinted hair. He wore a baggy long sleaved shirt with old jeans to match. Old sneakers were on his feet holding his slouched body. A lollipop twirrlin in his mouth. My mouth already started to water. (Me: Gimmie da' lollipop *0*) "Ok, her wounds are all healded and there seams to be nothing else wrong with her." The goctor folded the chart under his arm with a bright smile. "You can ship her out today." They nodded as he left them wit me. Who were these guys? They didn't look fermiliar at all. "You can open your eyes now, Acelina." The old man smiled in saticfaction. Crap. My eyes popped open all the way. I could see them alot clearer now. "Wh-who are you?" I asked swallowing the spit in my mouth from it watering. "That will all be answered soon nough. Just get your rest. We will be back later to take you to your new home." My eyes formed a shallow glare. "I don't have a home. No anymore." I whispered the last part under my breath. This seemed to intrest the 10 year old boy. He walked up to me and dug into his pocket, pulling out a fresh green lollipop. My favorite. He unwrapped it and said, "Open." My mouth creaked open. He stuck the treat into my wet cavern and started to follow the old man out the door. Just before he left, he cocked his head back and pulled the treat out of his moth with his thumb and index finger. There sat a lime green lollipop. 

Foreword

 

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TatiiLee #1
Chapter 1: I love Death Note! Do update!

Could you add more tags to your fic? Like --->> Lawliet. LightYagami. Stuff like that.

Please check my fic out: "A Kitten" <3

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/349009/a-kitten-deathnote-japanese-romance-shounenai-chibi-lightyagami-lawliet
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konpei
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* Love oh my goodness horrible typo >< thanks for the awesome chappie! :D yayayayay *excited* keep the cool beans up :D
animeK_oss
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Eeeek! Awesome sauce!! <3 <3 I love it!! x33 I totally need to know what's going to happen next!!!~~~ <3
konpei
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New reader! I live death note! :D YAY I'm so glad you thought of this ! :) ~ update soon neh? This is quite awesome :')
Lyricz
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I totally LOVE DEATH NOTE!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!
animeK_oss
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OH. MY. GOSH. I love Death Note. TOTALLY love Death Note. More importantly, I love L. <3 And already, your story has gotten hold of my attention. <3 *0* THIS. IS. AWESOME. And I love what you chose for the background! x33