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The Night and the Fae
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Dahyun woke up shivering. Her mind felt as though it were raw. She tried to sit up, but her movements were restricted. A blanket had been wrapped tightly around her, but not tight enough that she felt trapped. Lying back down, she closed her eyes, but it did nothing to stop her headache. Behind her eyelids, she saw a mixture of gentle happiness, lingering confusion, and something like nervousness. She wasn’t alone in the house. 

Both of her hands were sore, but she pulled her arms out of the blanket. The bed smelled as though it had been freshly washed. It was much softer than her own. Where was she? She had gone back to her apartment, but didn’t dare sleep there. Helen’s smugness had hung in the air when she got in. The fae had found her 'home' before finding her. Dahyun had then informed the landlord she was moving out. Those preparations would begin Monday. Where she was to go, she didn't know.

She ran through what she could remember. Momo and Sana had been following her. She had revealed her abilities to them. 

Turning around as best she could, she tried to get out of the bed. Her legs weren’t obeying her. She slid off the bed with a thump, still wrapped in the blanket.

In an instant, someone appeared in front of her. “Awake already?” 

“How—" Her voice failed her.

“I know,” Sana grinned, “I’m pretty fast.”

“Faster than me.” It sounded absurd to say. 

“You ran away from us, so you’re not bad.” She knelt down beside her. 

Dahyun felt arms go around her. She was lifted back onto the bed. 

“Even for a human you’re light. Are you eating right?” 

“That rhymed.” 

The other girl laughed. “Is this because you slept so long? You’re like a new person. All funny.” 

“How long did I sleep?” Dahyun tried to free herself again. The blanket was tucked in at the worst of places to be free of it.

She looked at her watch. “It’s ten.” A pause. “AM.” 

“Saturday?” It was Friday when she fell unconscious.

Sana shook her head. “Sunday.” 

“I slept a day?” She felt heavy, as though she’d woken up before she was ready.

She heard a giggle. “I’m kidding. It’s Saturday.” The girl sat on the side of the bed. “Hungry?” 

“No.” She couldn’t stay here. 

The girl gave her a look. “Liar.” The corner of her lip tugged up. “We have leftovers.”

“We?” 

“The other girls and I. You’re in our house.” 

“Why?” She couldn't yet make out the individuals. Both the emotional and physical world felt distant to her in this state.

“You didn’t think that just because you told us to, we’d leave you out there.” Momo appeared at her other side. Dahyun wasn’t unaccustomed to people appearing out of nowhere, but if it was the first supernatural thing she’d seen from her classmates, then it was strange. 

“This isn’t safe.” 

“You said that too.” They both wore expressions she couldn’t read, but they were amused again. They must have the same sense of humour. 

“Why isn’t it safe?” Sana asked. Her eyebrows furrowed slightly. 

“I,” her voice faltered again, “I’m not safe to be around.” It wasn’t a lie. She’d never experienced something like this, but if her grip on her emotions truly slipped, these girls could lose themselves to a trance. It was unlikely to be permanent, but it would not be pleasant if they got the wrong emotion. 

“Neither are we, Dahyun-ah.” Momo reached down and tugged on a corner of the blanket. It came undone in an instant. She looked down and saw that she was still wearing her school uniform. Her shoes were off, as was her tie. 

“Come on,” they took her by her arms, avoiding her hands, “let’s eat.” 

She was hauled to her feet and kept in between the two girls.

“I can walk.” She tried to shake them off, but stumbled in the process.

“You can try, but you’d break something,” Sana said as they tightened their grips. 

They walked out the door and into an elaborate hall. Sure enough, there were a number of doors. Some were open, revealing bedrooms, each with their own colour schemes. If there were truly eight girls in this house, some must have been sharing rooms. 

She heard voices downstairs, but they masked an overarching buzz of curiosity. Dahyun wasn’t nervous, but she was about to explain herself to eight people. Eight too many. It didn't help that this was a well-lived in house. The human constructs ensured that emotions were tied to the walls. They rarely faded away. There was a lot of happiness and love in this house. A very odd sight. It was almost overwhelming.

“Doing okay?” Sana asked when she stopped. “I can always carry you.”

She shook her head. Her legs were shaky with each step. She was grateful for their help. When she looked at their emotions, she saw a light blue aura. Guilt gnawed at her. 

“How do you both feel?”

“A little sore around my neck, but I’ll live,” Momo said. 

“I’m sor—“ 

“Kidding,” she said. “But you di

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The ending is here! Your support had me writing a lot of it in one go and I've never written so much all in one go. Thanks so much for reading this story and being patient enough to keep up with it!

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A_B_J_Ch #1
Chapter 43: A gem, truly! The universe is very well detailed, the characters are consistent, deep and naturally progressing within the story. This will definitely make it to my list of stories to read again and again.
I especially appreciate the difference between the nations. And how those differences are addressed.
I am curious to what is the base for the fae language. I may try to compare it to some of the human or fictional languages to quench my curiosity.
My only confusion lays with what happened to Dahyun's family. Maybe I missed it somewhere in the text. But I did not catch why they would not be able to make it to the "court" scene at the end.
But it is a minor detail, which may or may not be explained in my second read-through :)
Pallas
#2
Chapter 43: I finally end this story. Wow, that was a journey, a long one.
I have so much to praise about the writing and development but I can't put it on the right words.
Just know that you make a excellent job here, author-nim. Even though I came only for the "saidahmo" tag (lol) I stay for the universe that is showing here.
I would love to read more about TWICE in that universe, such as Dahyun finally having some happiness after all the pain she came through. But if we don't have more of this world, it's ok. This fanfic worth every secon I spend reading.

Again, thank you so much for writing this, author-nim. Stay healthy!💜
So_Dry
#3
Chapter 43: Hi! I am not sure if I ever left comments here before, but now I feel more at ease doing so. It took me three times to read the story fully to grasp what I needed. The first time I was going through it, confusion was dominating, I had a great deal of questions circulating in my head. It was hard to grasp the flow of the events and so I was struggling to put the pieces together. Characters conversation sometimes were bundled and I misplaced them many times. It brought more disappointment throughout my reading journey. But I kept going at it despite those feelings I had.

What attracted me in the story was the new concept of fantasy you have introduced, though initially when I came it was for Dahyun main rule in it, but I grew more interest and anticipation for her struggle/dilemma when it came to acting on emotions. It was ongoing at the time, and when I finally read the end, I felt more lacking and dissatisfaction surged mostly.



I took a good break until I decided to come again and revisit the story. This second attempt filled so many holes I initially had in me. The grasp on the reasons that lead to such events were much clearer and I had finally connected the dots to form a good flow of events. And even though I had some questions answered, there was a portion that was left scattered and perhaps I was hesitant to search through it. The emotional part of the story was a challenge on itself, but it's needed to be grasped and understood. A part of me ignored the fact I couldn't translate those emotions been discussed throughout the chapters, and when I reached the end again. I still felt a great deal of discomfort as I knew the emotional part is what's the story is mostly made of. I was convincing myself that it wasn't needed to have full clarity on and I would just be okay without it.



It took me a long while until I decided to come back. I was determined to not miss anything this time and make sure to make effort on the emotional part specifically while reading. I still carried a desire to skim through it, but I was able to stop myself from doing so. And to do that, I created a note dedicated to colors and their correlations to the emotional world. Even included a scent list. The results were shocking, though it shouldn't have been because I knew how that contributed to my confusions. I came to appreciate the story even more after this. You had me thinking and immersing myself on how emotions actually worked. Throughout my break time between chapters, I sat down and thought through all decisions that been made, specifically one's by Dahyun. It had me think that I could be just as lacking as her, specially when it came to the reactions she witnesses based on emotions felt in certain events for certain people. Another part of me couldn't help but see it fit so well to be lacking. As if it carries much simpler answers than those that carries more questions in it then resolution. But the complications been presented showed how being in such state is wrong in itself, specially if you knew how the others actually felt and will feel depending your responds.

The wording in the story was nothing I ever read in fictions but it made sense for it to be that way. Can you believe that your work has built a certain amount of calm within me? Not that I never had it, but this gave me more reasons to reconsider and backtrack my emotional responds. So many topics been discussed here and emotions been fully explored through the dialogues. It's been a worthy journey that I would gladly go down through it again, and I will.



I would like to thank you for what you have gave us and introduced. It was a much appreciated knowledge to imagine and feel through those characters. Being able to present it alone is enough to have me carry so much respect for you. While indeed some of us comes for the pairing, but mostly I get more invested when it touches real life struggles. Yours was one to open many eyes on how really emotions works and what kind of questions and consequences it carries and arises. For that, you have my deep gratitude!
Selina1715
#4
Chapter 2: Oh? Is someone behind Dubu?
Shade4149 #5
Chapter 43: So good loved every second
Shade4149 #6
Chapter 30: This is so good I was so happy to see the completed version here when I was waiting on Ao3
dkdldb #7
Chapter 43: I don't usually read fantasy stories, but this was absolutely amazing. Really loved the plot flow and portrayal of characters in this!
Van1212 #8
Author did you see Dahyun's MBTI test result ? It matches so well with the way you decided to portrait her in this story, it is amazing.
Btopinkforever
#9
Chapter 43: I got to admit at first I was here for Saidahmo but as the story progressed my mind started to come here for the plot and writing. This story was like something I needed in my life. I don’t know why but it was. So thank you so much for writing this. I can go on forever talking about this book but I will keep you from my emotions haha Anyways I personally love how you ended this because it’s not a perfect ending for them but it’s the most realistic ending I’ve seen. Meaning the characters had their ups and downs and they still had problems but like in real life they figured some out but some will still take time. Wow I at expressing myself and writing haha I’m glad you left the chapter like this!
Btopinkforever
#10
Chapter 42: Surprisingly I get where Dahyun is getting at and if she did kill Rila and Yrest then that would’ve probably been the ending point for her. So I’m glad she didn’t do anything.