Almost Perfect

The Night and the Fae
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Momo woke to a gentle voice. 

“Time to get up,” they said. “You’ll miss breakfast.”

Her eyes opened. She was greeted by bright blue eyes. The colours swirled within the irises. She was transfixed by the sight. 

“Something on my face?” Dahyun asked, tilting her head to the side. 

“Your eyes,” Momo said. “The colours are moving.” Would they be hidden the moment she spoke now? She really didn’t want it to. 

She smiled. “Emotions aren’t stationary. Ever.” The blue didn’t disappear, but green was starting to appear. 

Momo realised her head was right by the girl’s neck. She didn’t feel hungry, even though she could hear the girl’s pulse, which was quick. Her scent was stronger than ever. 

She lifted her head anyway. Her arm had been around the girl’s waist. She hadn’t noticed how soft the material of her grey clothes was. It was a mixture of velvet and silk. Stretchy too. 

“Morning.” Momo still couldn’t look away from her eyes. Pink had joined in.

“Good morning,” Dahyun said. “How did you sleep?” She put an emphasis on the you. That was when Momo saw that Sana wasn’t there. When had she left?

“Great,” she admitted. “Was that you?” 

“Normally I would answer yes, but I slept really well too.” Dahyun puffed out her cheeks, her mind begin to work. “I don’t know why.”

She couldn’t resist poking her cheeks. “You don't have to think too much in the morning.” 

“But it’s good to think.” She gave her a look. “At night no notes can be taken.” The fairy got up and stretched her arms behind her. Momo heard several bones crack. 

“Did you never study at night?” That was where all students, high-school and beyond, thrived. 

“Sometimes,” she said. “But usually night was comprised of research exchanges or hunting.” She got her bag and pulled out the crumpled uniform. Did she ever iron her things? Had she learned about that yet?

“Hunting?”

Dahyun nodded. “That’s how we got our food. Usually,” she shrugged, “with time, we did realise the ease at which food could be obtained in the human world. Though finding fruit in a supermarket pales in comparison to stumbling across a bush or tree yourself.” A small smile as she looked at her. “Can’t imagine me hunting, can you?” 

“Not really.” 

“We should try it sometime,” her smile grew, “put those senses to the test.” Then she disappeared into the bathroom to change. 

Momo smiled. She couldn’t help but think that this was how things were supposed to be. She felt completely at ease. And not just because of the calm Dahyun had given her.

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Breakfast was weird. The moment Sana came down, the girls shared very similar looks. They definitely knew about how the three of them had slept, but none said anything else other than good morning. 

“Did you remember we had a Math test today?” Chaeyoung asked. 

She didn’t. “We’ve had a lot of other things on our minds.”

Several mumbled their agreement. For once, it hadn’t just been her and Momo who couldn’t get a particular fairy out of their heads. 

Sana sat down next to Nayeon, took a blood bag from the table and drank. She hadn’t realised how hungry she was. Had Dahyun done that too? She was still feeling calm. When she’d woken up, she had never felt so at peace—so at home. It was the best sleep she’d gotten in a while. Everything felt natural: the cuddling, the flirting, all of it. Had she not been so overwhelmed, she might have even kissed her. 

She wanted to blame her feelings on Dahyun’s powers. She couldn’t. This was all on her. That was part of the reason why she’d pulled away. Again. Momo had said it yesterday: Dahyun didn’t know—really know—what she was feeling, nor what Sana and Momo were. If Sana closed off now, she was still safe. 

Or so she thought. 

“Morning!” Jeongyeon called. 

“Good morning.” Dahyun smiled. Her hair tumbled down in waves. They were still blue, one shade of it blending into the next. Her uniform hung loose. The buttons at the top were all undone. Had she always worn her uniform like that? 

As she walked over, Sana couldn’t miss the look she threw her way. It was questioning, but still made bright by the smile she wore. 

“You like pancakes?” Nayeon pointed at the three stacks in the middle of the table. 

“I,” Dahyun came closer, “think I would?” Her stare was focused. On pancakes. “It’s cake?”

“Nope. The humans just call it that,” Tzuyu said. 

“Really?” The fae glanced at the oven. “So it's not in that?”

“It is,” the youngest grinned, “and they’re actually cake, and this is the pan they're made in.” She sped over to the kitchen, lifting one to show the girl. 

Dahyun chuckled. “I know so little.”

“Just ask whenever you’re not sure. We’ll tell you what it is, eventually.” She winked at Dahyun. 

The fairy fiddled with her tie. It hung loose around her neck. The smile still hadn’t left her face. Sana knew she was staring, but this was something she didn't want to look away from.

“Coffee?” Dahyun asked. 

Nayeon, Jeongyeon, and Mina said they did. 

As Dahyun started the coffee machine, she got an intense look of concentration. Sana could have smiled right then and there. She didn’t. She almost felt like she’d given up her smiling rights this morning. 

“For me too?” someone called down from the stairs. 

The fairy looked up, a soft smile breaking out across her face. Sana felt a pang of disappointment. Had she not been so caught up in her fear, she might have also gotten that look. She had gotten something close to it this morning. Then she’d ruined it. Now all she got was the weird half-smile that had been sent her as a good-morning. 

“Will do,” Dahyun said. “Milk, sugar?” She looked around. The girls told her their orders, while Momo went to stand next to her. 

“So you don’t know what popcorn is, or pizza and lasagna, but you know coffee?” She raised an eyebrow.

Dahyun shrugged. “Your food is confusing to me, it c

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The ending is here! Your support had me writing a lot of it in one go and I've never written so much all in one go. Thanks so much for reading this story and being patient enough to keep up with it!

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A_B_J_Ch #1
Chapter 43: A gem, truly! The universe is very well detailed, the characters are consistent, deep and naturally progressing within the story. This will definitely make it to my list of stories to read again and again.
I especially appreciate the difference between the nations. And how those differences are addressed.
I am curious to what is the base for the fae language. I may try to compare it to some of the human or fictional languages to quench my curiosity.
My only confusion lays with what happened to Dahyun's family. Maybe I missed it somewhere in the text. But I did not catch why they would not be able to make it to the "court" scene at the end.
But it is a minor detail, which may or may not be explained in my second read-through :)
Pallas
#2
Chapter 43: I finally end this story. Wow, that was a journey, a long one.
I have so much to praise about the writing and development but I can't put it on the right words.
Just know that you make a excellent job here, author-nim. Even though I came only for the "saidahmo" tag (lol) I stay for the universe that is showing here.
I would love to read more about TWICE in that universe, such as Dahyun finally having some happiness after all the pain she came through. But if we don't have more of this world, it's ok. This fanfic worth every secon I spend reading.

Again, thank you so much for writing this, author-nim. Stay healthy!💜
So_Dry
#3
Chapter 43: Hi! I am not sure if I ever left comments here before, but now I feel more at ease doing so. It took me three times to read the story fully to grasp what I needed. The first time I was going through it, confusion was dominating, I had a great deal of questions circulating in my head. It was hard to grasp the flow of the events and so I was struggling to put the pieces together. Characters conversation sometimes were bundled and I misplaced them many times. It brought more disappointment throughout my reading journey. But I kept going at it despite those feelings I had.

What attracted me in the story was the new concept of fantasy you have introduced, though initially when I came it was for Dahyun main rule in it, but I grew more interest and anticipation for her struggle/dilemma when it came to acting on emotions. It was ongoing at the time, and when I finally read the end, I felt more lacking and dissatisfaction surged mostly.



I took a good break until I decided to come again and revisit the story. This second attempt filled so many holes I initially had in me. The grasp on the reasons that lead to such events were much clearer and I had finally connected the dots to form a good flow of events. And even though I had some questions answered, there was a portion that was left scattered and perhaps I was hesitant to search through it. The emotional part of the story was a challenge on itself, but it's needed to be grasped and understood. A part of me ignored the fact I couldn't translate those emotions been discussed throughout the chapters, and when I reached the end again. I still felt a great deal of discomfort as I knew the emotional part is what's the story is mostly made of. I was convincing myself that it wasn't needed to have full clarity on and I would just be okay without it.



It took me a long while until I decided to come back. I was determined to not miss anything this time and make sure to make effort on the emotional part specifically while reading. I still carried a desire to skim through it, but I was able to stop myself from doing so. And to do that, I created a note dedicated to colors and their correlations to the emotional world. Even included a scent list. The results were shocking, though it shouldn't have been because I knew how that contributed to my confusions. I came to appreciate the story even more after this. You had me thinking and immersing myself on how emotions actually worked. Throughout my break time between chapters, I sat down and thought through all decisions that been made, specifically one's by Dahyun. It had me think that I could be just as lacking as her, specially when it came to the reactions she witnesses based on emotions felt in certain events for certain people. Another part of me couldn't help but see it fit so well to be lacking. As if it carries much simpler answers than those that carries more questions in it then resolution. But the complications been presented showed how being in such state is wrong in itself, specially if you knew how the others actually felt and will feel depending your responds.

The wording in the story was nothing I ever read in fictions but it made sense for it to be that way. Can you believe that your work has built a certain amount of calm within me? Not that I never had it, but this gave me more reasons to reconsider and backtrack my emotional responds. So many topics been discussed here and emotions been fully explored through the dialogues. It's been a worthy journey that I would gladly go down through it again, and I will.



I would like to thank you for what you have gave us and introduced. It was a much appreciated knowledge to imagine and feel through those characters. Being able to present it alone is enough to have me carry so much respect for you. While indeed some of us comes for the pairing, but mostly I get more invested when it touches real life struggles. Yours was one to open many eyes on how really emotions works and what kind of questions and consequences it carries and arises. For that, you have my deep gratitude!
Selina1715
#4
Chapter 2: Oh? Is someone behind Dubu?
Shade4149 #5
Chapter 43: So good loved every second
Shade4149 #6
Chapter 30: This is so good I was so happy to see the completed version here when I was waiting on Ao3
dkdldb #7
Chapter 43: I don't usually read fantasy stories, but this was absolutely amazing. Really loved the plot flow and portrayal of characters in this!
Van1212 #8
Author did you see Dahyun's MBTI test result ? It matches so well with the way you decided to portrait her in this story, it is amazing.
Btopinkforever
#9
Chapter 43: I got to admit at first I was here for Saidahmo but as the story progressed my mind started to come here for the plot and writing. This story was like something I needed in my life. I don’t know why but it was. So thank you so much for writing this. I can go on forever talking about this book but I will keep you from my emotions haha Anyways I personally love how you ended this because it’s not a perfect ending for them but it’s the most realistic ending I’ve seen. Meaning the characters had their ups and downs and they still had problems but like in real life they figured some out but some will still take time. Wow I at expressing myself and writing haha I’m glad you left the chapter like this!
Btopinkforever
#10
Chapter 42: Surprisingly I get where Dahyun is getting at and if she did kill Rila and Yrest then that would’ve probably been the ending point for her. So I’m glad she didn’t do anything.